Just Whiskers Away

[alpine fulcrum]

@weak ocean

@sour lodge

@wise wasp

@gentle kayak

@stark flare

@velvet grotto

@viral sedge

@peak forge

@bright sinew

@lapis monolith

@hazy kiln

@woven lance

@robust bluff

@frosty smelt

@cobalt sluice

@wise wasp

@royal kettle

@round spade

@cold shale

@honest shard

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@granite phoenix

[sour lodge]

I like this title

First

Great pauses in this one, and repetition, always with the best word choices, this is one of my favorites of yours!💜

[alpine fulcrum]

Thank you Roseyy ♡

[wise wasp]

I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I get a lot of Pavlova vibes from this poem and I love it 💜

[alpine fulcrum]

I don't know who is Pavlova but I'm glad you liked it! 💕

[wise wasp]

Vera Pavlov is a famous Russian poet. I highly recommend her work

[weak ocean]

Just oscars away…..

[alpine fulcrum]

I'll check her out. Thanks for recommending

[alpine fulcrum]

Oscars? 🤔

[weak ocean]

https://tenor.com/view/oscar-the-oscars-oscar-winner-academy-awards-oscar-statuette-gif-21308057

[alpine fulcrum]

Lmao why oscars

Its an award for acting

[weak ocean]

award just focus on this word

😋

[alpine fulcrum]

Gotchu 😭

@dire shell

[dire shell]

WHISKERS AWAY

JANE

MY DEAR FRIENDO

ITS A SAD LOVE POEM?

[alpine fulcrum]

Not love just sad haha

[dire shell]

NO?

SAD

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SAD

[dire shell]

GODAMN SAD

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AWWW

[dire shell]

HOW DID YOU DO THIS?

I CRIED

JUST A LIL

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I'LL HUG YOU

[dire shell]

Please 😭

GOOD POEM JANE

ITS LIKE A MUSIC!!

I LOVE IT

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THANK YOU!!

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@bright sinew

[bright sinew]

quite nice poem, is this a sonnet if im not mistaken ? i like the word choice as well

[alpine fulcrum]

I didn't intend for it to be a sonnet actually

[bright sinew]

Oh ok

[hazy kiln]

Hey, that‘s not a sonnet^^ a sonnet is 2 quartets and 2 trios = 14 lines

[alpine fulcrum]

Exactly

[hazy kiln]

Oop i wanted to reply to this (:

I really like the repetition of whiskers away, i find it to have a really nice rhythm too!! Keep up the good work ❤️

[alpine fulcrum]

Thank you!

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@royal kettle

[royal kettle]

Nice.

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Just Whiskers Away - Jane

[granite phoenix]

The poem you wrote is full of strong emotions.

[honest shard]

"Talismans of false prophets,
And bewitching charms of woes
All my possessions melted to myth,
You--oh, again a whisker away--
Utterly another elusive ghost." this is beautiful Jane1!!

[alpine fulcrum]

I'm glad you liked it ♡

[frosty smelt]

Ooo I love this one!! Your poems are always so amazing

[alpine fulcrum]

Just Whiskers Away

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@wise wasp