#A ghost in the wind

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deft prawn
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She floats like a ghost
With an heir of remembrance
Fading into the air around her.
She sways with the wind,
Never staying in one place,
She does not hold onto my eye’s embrace.
She simply walks in a daze,
Leaving footprints in her wake.

She must be here.
She must be something.
But I do not care to know.
She must be severed from the earth.
She must have a heart to show.
I do not reach her.
She seems so far away.
She must be lonely.
She must have something to say to me.
But she will not let me know.

deft prawn
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I need help with the end

candid pagoda
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Maybe something like "the thoughts woven into her soul?" "where the footsteps she left behind goes?" what kind of ending are you looking for?

flat moat
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"She has secrets coddled to her chest.
In strife I dig revealing what she has to show"
Suggestions for the end ! Hopefully this gives you some inspiration:>

deft prawn
deft prawn