Carpe noctem

[willow rune]

Carpe Noctem

The thin line between sunrise and night

Draws me to the conclusion that one might

Think that only the day is to be admired in a cheerful light

However, the smart poet seizes the darkness in its fullest hours

As one could think by doing so it encounters

Mythical creatures that hide beneath us, near the mountains

Blind to the normal eye they are

Bright and beautiful and bizarre

Strangely empty they make us feel

The knowledge they’re among us

Makes our skin goosebump and rust

Yet, their presence is ethereal -D.F.

[slender inlet]

Wow

[willow rune]

thank you omg<3

[kindred fox]

Wonderful! @willow rune has just pregressed to level 3!

[slender inlet]

This is the first poem I read in this server and it's wonderful

Really flowers to you

[willow rune]

omg THANK YOU youre so kind this makes me so happy ❤️

[slender inlet]

Do you have more of these. Would love to read more. I'm trying to read from great writers to get better. My poetry is dull🥲

[willow rune]

yes i do!! I'm publishing a book soon, then i'll send u some of them (: a lot of them have to be reworked on i guess

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@frigid steppe @scenic spruce @quaint egret

@boreal inlet @solar zinc @ancient pine

[slender inlet]

It's really good poetry

[willow rune]

@heady kraken @hazy notch

thank u <3<3

[solar zinc]

What

[willow rune]

i j tagged a few ppl to review my poem ^^

[willow rune]

@blissful dove

@heady kraken

[heady kraken]

Very good poem

[blissful dove]

U tag me, I tag you.

[willow rune]

no problem with that^^ make sure to leave feedback tho <33

[blissful dove]

Good poem.
A bit light on content or depth but good non the less.
Good wording and rhythm
Solid 8/10

[rotund cradle]

It's lovely 😄😊

[boreal inlet]

Beautiful!

[hazy notch]

"However, the smart poet seizes the darkness in its fullest hour"

i love how you put that

the poem's really beautiful great job!!