#A Letter from The Manipulator
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@distant sphinx
Yess
@vague dagger
@chrome palm
@deep lava
@gray bloom
@wheat ridge
@fluid osprey
@dark flint
I never fought to live,
I was never brave… oooh
Words across worlds..you tell emm girl or what yeah 👌🏻
Never you a friend,
I was never your. 🌹
🥰Thanks
Wow. This is the first time I'm listening to someone read my poem and it feels amazing. Thank you so much! 😃
wow great poem, the vocabulary is insane in this
Thank you!
you're welcome do u want to check out my work ?
Sure
@rain plover
@mint hare
@half hawk
I love this , and your writing style
Wonderful! @half hawk has just pregressed to level 13!
Appreciate it 🥰
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Very visual, very rich vocabulary, and very nicely structured.
For me, the rhyme scheme goes perfectly with the poem. I may be overthinking it but the neat, consistent ABCB adds on to the idea of it being a “letter from the manipulator” - who even manipulates their sentences to shape them the desired way.
Wow that's a great way of looking at it. My poems are usually open to interpretation and it brings me so much joy when you all come up with these stuff! Thanks for reading!
Thank you for sharing it! Happy to read 🫶
Istg every time you tag me on a poem I enjoy every line and every stanza. As expected, well done
♡♡
@stable warren
beautiful, i love this
the words you use in your poems are so amazing and you paint such a pleasant image with them
i'm impressed
👏 💜
Should I tag you in more of my works?? 🤔
@woven spoke
@hollow hound
@wicked shale
Nice nice.
I love this one!! The style is pretty unique and I like it!!
@iron anchor
@tawny sentinel
@short hinge
Oh hey! 🤭
it feels like self deprication is strong here
it almost feels like the narrator is trying to convince themselves if anything
this is great fr
"Words across worlds
Advertently I strung,
Twisted pawns for 'us',
Heard I, voids die young?" the whole poem is absolutely beautiful! its my first time reading your works and Im already impressed :D
I'm glad you liked it 💕
@wicked shale
Once again excellent word choices, @chrome palm you've got an up and coming rival, you worked well within your chosen rhyme scheme, wonderful word depth and theme💜
Why don't I get support like this on my poems? 😞
Why don't you write a new poem for me every two days?
Thank you ♡
💜__Official Collab Request__💜
Okay bbg 💕
Why don't you? 👀
I don't require your support 💅🏼
@chrome palm