#A Letter from The Manipulator

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@mystic plinth

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@chrome palm

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@lofty anchor

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👀

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@distant sphinx

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@vague dagger

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@chrome palm

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I never fought to live,
I was never brave… oooh

Words across worlds..you tell emm girl or what yeah 👌🏻

Never you a friend,
I was never your. 🌹

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# green horizon

Wow. This is the first time I'm listening to someone read my poem and it feels amazing. Thank you so much! 😃

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wow great poem, the vocabulary is insane in this

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@rain plover

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@half hawk

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I love this , and your writing style

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Very visual, very rich vocabulary, and very nicely structured.
For me, the rhyme scheme goes perfectly with the poem. I may be overthinking it but the neat, consistent ABCB adds on to the idea of it being a “letter from the manipulator” - who even manipulates their sentences to shape them the desired way.

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Istg every time you tag me on a poem I enjoy every line and every stanza. As expected, well done

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@stable warren

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beautiful, i love this
the words you use in your poems are so amazing and you paint such a pleasant image with them
i'm impressed
👏 💜

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stable warren
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EVERY TIME :D

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@woven spoke

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@hollow hound

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@wicked shale

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Nice nice.

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I love this one!! The style is pretty unique and I like it!!

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@iron anchor

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@tawny sentinel

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@short hinge

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WHO SUMMONED ME TO LENDETH THEE MY POWER TO DESTROY

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Oh hi jane

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Oh hey! 🤭

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it feels like self deprication is strong here

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it almost feels like the narrator is trying to convince themselves if anything

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this is great fr

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"Words across worlds
Advertently I strung,
Twisted pawns for 'us',
Heard I, voids die young?
" the whole poem is absolutely beautiful! its my first time reading your works and Im already impressed :D

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@wicked shale

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Once again excellent word choices, @chrome palm you've got an up and coming rival, you worked well within your chosen rhyme scheme, wonderful word depth and theme💜

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@chrome palm