#Ink & Anguish: A Poet’s Odyssey

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analog sand
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@worn willow

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@onyx tulip

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@mint thorn

worn willow
analog sand
worn willow
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THE TYPO AT HICCUPPED, OMG

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Very immaculately portrayed how it is to be poet. Well done!

analog sand
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@bleak wharf

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@atomic seal

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@west venture

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@brazen pasture

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@brazen geyser

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@frozen slate

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@sweet schooner

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@full folio ct

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@cyan robin

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@rigid bolt

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@exotic axle

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@restive tendon

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@last ridge

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@thin rock

brazen pasture
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Very inviting and expressed greatly with a second hand experience 😊

analog sand
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@bright socket

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@sturdy whale

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@tardy helm

analog sand
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@rare vapor

queen anvil
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wow you did a wonderful job writing this , im honored you took inspiration from me

analog sand
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@night tusk

gentle needle
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wow

mint thorn
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ok but the way you capture the struggle of writing and the fear of not being understood is super relatable. i love how you describe your frustration with vivid imagery, like words “pirouetting” and rejections as “tattooed scars.” it makes the whole process feel so intense and real. your voice comes through strongly throughout the poem, and the raw emotion really pulls the reader in. the flow of the poem, however, is a bit abrupt in places, but i think it actually adds to the feeling of chaos and struggle you’re expressing. really loved this one :)

analog sand
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@half crow

half crow
analog sand
bright socket
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DOPE!

analog sand
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@reef hatch

reef hatch
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But beyond my anxious prose,
Lies my truest fear, unspoken,
That the reader may not,
grasp the pain in every stanza

Spot on! Everyone gets something analogous to this.

analog sand
bleak wharf
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This poem reads as an “f you” to writer’s block and writer insecurity and I am here for it

analog sand
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@worn willow (re tag)

worn willow
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Almost ✅ but use enjambments for the longer lines