#Death For Flames

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frail salmon
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@lucid moss

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@lilac torrent

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@violet sage

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@loud plank

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@steep island

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@deep jewel

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@narrow marten

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@crystal stratus

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@zenith karma

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@lilac torrent

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@unique tapir

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@barren prairie

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@lapis dove

steep island
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I loved the middle lines!

frail salmon
steep island
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If this is what I am writing alongside? I need to quickly step up my game.

frail salmon
steep island
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nuh uh

lucid moss
frail salmon
lucid moss
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For i am,
A connoisseur of agony,
embracing pain,
In the echoes of passion,
where losses gain,
Oh, So darling,
these flames shall not stray,
For in love's eternal dance,
we will find our way.

[ same as what she said ]

frail salmon
crystal stratus
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I really like the way you compose your poems and the stanzas you write are unique

frail salmon
lilac torrent
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quite nice piece

frail salmon
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@dusty grotto

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@dim blade

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@patent perch

dim blade
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I love how you use old English type writing , it is interesting . And I love the poem !

unique tapir
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You show love as both a desirable "sweetest blood" and a painful "poison ivy." This reflects how love can bring both joy and sorrow. The line "reigned am I-- Thy poison ivy so de riguer" hints at a desire to control or be in control of love's grip. Beautiful poem.

frail salmon
frail salmon
frail salmon
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@fading temple

fading temple
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where do you get all of these fancy, beautiful words?????????????

frail salmon
fading temple
barren prairie
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Spectacular again! You never fail to disappoint with your amazing word choices and bright writing style.

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though it’s short, I feel like there’s a fair amount of emotion in here; both passion (in the first few lines) and some despair/pain (“Or reigned am I--
Thy poison ivy so de riguer.”; “For a connoisseur of agony I remain--”)

frail salmon
frail salmon
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@slender flicker

narrow marten
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Not enough🥲, gorgeous words and a wonderful portrayal of the beauty and anguish that is love, when's my turn for a collab so we can put your others to shame?💜