#So Ancient
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So ancient, oh !
Upon your skin it perches,
Threading rust within,
No more could lies be,
Wantonly braced, so wary.
In twilight's dusk, echoes faintly keen,
Whispering memories of what might have been,
Lost in shadows unforeseen,
Yet hope lingers...
Oceans churn & skies may weep,
For all sad poets who forever said,
Old times lived, our longest dream.
Impressive! Mine was about romanticizing a time that isn't worth romanticizing while yours is a lament about the past!
I tried 😅
I require more of this, gotta be at least 5 stanzas if you're going to make this little bit so good💜
Hehe Thanks!
@errant gazelle
@modest condor
@analog nacelle
I HAVE ARRIVED
WHO DARES TO CALL ME TO THESE MORTAL PLANE'-
oh hi Jane
interesting indeed
@vital cobalt