#Wanderlust

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@late marsh

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@fallow pagoda

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@red turret

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@tough basin

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@timber fern

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I was afraid to share this one but did anyway..

red turret
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The typography is pleasing to my soul

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This one's great, I'm glad you shared, you have some great complex word choices, and a wonderful depth, plus the typography makes it unique, well done!💜

fallow pagoda
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I envy your vocabulary, adds lot of beauty ur work🗣️

timber fern
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I too envy your vocab

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@fading kestrel

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little flare
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@fading kestrel

late marsh
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Your vocabulary is overflowing in ways that people who understand it would appreciate them. I myself feel like I'm learning a lot of combinations about the wordly world from your work. I like the line 'Where all poetries lost true muse' and how it unfolds asking the end to capture the poet's being. I feel somewhat like I'm reading literary works of contemporary poets like Plath just in a more modern way. Excellent work really, I appreciate your writings. Please keep tagging me in more, can't wait <33

little flare
little flare
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This is such a creative and impressive critique. Thank you for delving into this poem and share your thoughts.

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I've come to conclude that this detailed analysis might be helpful in understanding the elements in this poem:

In this poem, the narrator wants to disappear one peaceful night (nightfall of the dead) before the unforeseen future arrives. She walks while all her memories resonates in her mind, some strange or unknown faded memory also happen to her, all reminding her of every scar she had sustained in her life. She wants to disappear where truth lies, where lonely travellers lost hope and doused their ships in agony, where all poets lost true muse (Poets love their inspirationto write and loss of that can be agonizing. Here's a dramatic outlook.)--and that place is the place of beyond this deranged life. She wants to walk ahead of the shallow waters of lies and greed and she asks for the southern breeze to sway her to the ends of the canyon--where her will set free, where her thoughts lay her to her death to finally find freedom from despair and where Chrysanthemum fields accost glory and pride (both flowers are used during funeral hence here holding beyond carnation seams means demise and pride of Chrysanthemum also means that they are put to use when its her time). Canyon here refers to life, the end of where she wants to reach because she believes in the aforementioned. She believes that once she has left her life, the gallows will be removed, people will finally put down their crossbows they've used to harm her all along and that she'll be finally free and cured. Never forth she'd want to walk through life again that seemed like a disease to her.

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@icy cypress

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icy cypress
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Sure!

little flare
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@fickle sierra

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@whole laurel

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@sturdy stirrup

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Ooo the vocabulary is amazing, the style is really good and expressions are really good as well
I really love it!!