You

[torn acorn]

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@ruby surge

@thin oracle

@stiff roost

@lunar flume

[ruby surge]

Damn,
the bleeding carnation's epitomized pasquin
chemtrails of truth bred indelible scars
This piece has a strong emotional resonance. Good job 👍

[torn acorn]

Appreciate it!

[ruby surge]

You deserve it 😊

[lunar flume]

Ooh another one I get to see

I like the typography you use in this one, I use similar occasionally, you have excellent imagery and a very complex style of metaphors and vocabulary, I'd love to see some more variation in line length and pauses for breath, but this is incredibly well done!💜

The storytelling is horrifyingly awesome

[torn acorn]

Thank you!!

[stiff roost]

The way you weave tales in your writing is magical and facinating (:

[torn acorn]

@hexed olive

@hexed olive

[hexed olive]

I absolutely adore how your metaphors work here its gorgeous. Like 'Delinquent Lips', 'Your face held recitals', it's intriguing and engaging. The theme is unique, having to have a solace that makes you feel comfort in your most tormenting times only to discover that you were in your own solace, that's.. really powerful. It makes me think that either the person who narrator had also went through the harshness similar to narrator, the same pain and bruises. That's maybe why the narrator and their person appear same. Or perhaps during the difficulties narrator felt immensely alone only to realize they were not because they had themselves. I like the word play here a lot. I enjoyed reading this, thank you for allowing me to read your expression. Awesome work!!!!

[torn acorn]

💕💕Thanks puff

[torn acorn]

@modern raven

[modern raven]

A well done, strong poem that I would always come back to read!

[torn acorn]

So sweet of you!

[modern raven]

Whenever I read a work of yours, I learn new vocabs and I can view a really fascinating perspective. Thank you for being an idol I would want to write like some day!

[torn acorn]

You just made my day with your kind words ♡

[torn acorn]

@tribal finch

[torn acorn]

@void trellis

[void trellis]

my god.... thats such a good narrative, DAMN

[torn acorn]

@hearty flame

[torn acorn]

Thank you for reading

[hearty flame]

Afsos bhare afsane honge,
Ranjha majnu b kabhi Dil hare honge
Uss muskan ko apni khwaish na bana ,
Voo , voo muskan hai jispr hazaro Raja apni riyaste hare honge

A© (just written)

[torn acorn]

Prettyy

[hearty flame]

Thank you 🫶

[torn acorn]

@hallow cradle

[hallow cradle]

WHO DARES TO CALL ME

oh hi Jane!

[torn acorn]

Oh hey!

[hallow cradle]

weirdly enough

reminds me of a fanfiction i once read-

'live for me, so i can get the strength to live for you'

[torn acorn]

Oh damn

[hallow cradle]

it's amazing btw

really nice read fr fr

[ruby surge]

This sounds very…. idk selfish to me lmao

[hallow cradle]

you are right, but in my eyes, it isn't inherently wrong to be selfish

[torn acorn]

If someone tells this to me, I'd die the first thing 😭

[hallow cradle]

sometimes, you need to prioritise yourself

sometimes, you must for a better future for yourself

and in a case like that...... for the both of them

[ruby surge]

Did I forget to tag you in my selfish love poem ? 😅😅

[hallow cradle]

prolly not, i missed a few of your poems because i wasn't online much

[ruby surge]

Oooh let me check

[torn acorn]

@zinc swan

[zinc swan]

JANE YOU ARE A DAMN PERFECT POET

ITS BEAUTIFUL

[autumn jay]

Thank you for sharing your poetry.

[torn acorn]

Wow Thank you ♡ 😭

[torn acorn]

Thank you for reading!

[torn acorn]

@hexed olive