mercy's paradox.

[plucky lintel]

@umbral prawn @buoyant aurora @gaunt osprey @torpid hinge @umbral prawn

@tired bough @obtuse schooner @tulip pebble

@noble charm

@faint holly

[faint holly]

Yoyoyoy

[plucky lintel]

@idle needle @hidden island

@sterile pine @solid thorn

@umbral prawn

@cold wyvern

@silver ridge

[faint holly]

I'll read it now

[plucky lintel]

@fickle vessel @dense barn@proper elm@worn jolt@tawny wyvern

[faint holly]

Fix rhe italics

The

[plucky lintel]

okeyyy

[faint holly]

In the second stanzc

Stanza

[plucky lintel]

huh?

[faint holly]

They were meant to be in italics right

It didn't work because of the space

[plucky lintel]

u mean the 3rd stanza?

[faint holly]

Second

"scars of beguile"

That one

"*bullet hole scabs? *"

Is it supposed to be

"bullet hole scabs"

[plucky lintel]

looks good to me

[faint holly]

Ohh

I guess it's cuz I'm on phone

[dense barn]

Good one!

[faint holly]

And yes

Of course

Amazing poem

The ending was sweet

Didn't feel abrupt

[plucky lintel]

yeahh probably

[faint holly]

Overall nice poem

[noble charm]

okbruv

[plucky lintel]

@strong skiff @velvet sorrel@shut snow

[noble charm]

jokes aside this is fire

[plucky lintel]

thanksss

[faint holly]

I can confirm

This is me

[plucky lintel]

well,we live in reflection of each other's lives.

@wise fractal @daring marten @knotty walrus@coral osprey

[faint holly]

Yes bruv

[strong skiff]

My God... this is SPECTACULAR
I have no words, I'm in awe
Well done, very well done ⭐

[faint holly]

Indeed

[plucky lintel]

thankss, thats sweet<3

[faint holly]

(let's act like the wrong reply never happened)

[plucky lintel]

LMAO HELP-

[obtuse schooner]

Really nice rap ,

And the 5th para is the best because same type of lines were in my poem but its lucifer not devil.

[idle needle]

*Now the tables have turned at last
When bending on their knees they ask
To carefully hold and nurture their heart
Forgiving me, for their own part. * 🫰

[plucky lintel]

like i always say great minds think alike haha

[obtuse schooner]

Lol

[tulip pebble]

love this one!! its really good!
last stanza was also really good <33

[tawny wyvern]

Beautifully written
That said some spelling errors here and there but nothing major.
The content was intense and fun to read plus the medium was fascinating.
Truely 100/10

[plucky lintel]

spelling errors u say? could u point them out ples?

[plucky lintel]

@broken ivy

[coral osprey]

This is good, totally ignored I was pinged apparently, love the typography and the imagery you use💜🔥 100% in the wrong channel thoughh🥲

[broken ivy]

Ummm.....

This should be in #1056779405491453992

[plucky lintel]

[plucky lintel]

just this one time,plej cut me some slack pleeeesj

[broken ivy]

I like this poem so you get the slack

[plucky lintel]

yay

[solid thorn]

Great imagery, especially in the 1rst stanza for me. It’s delightfully visual and thrilling to read (maybe censor descriptions of injuries, though, because not everyone may be as open to reading that!).
The flow of the poem is really nice, metered and seemingly effortless.
I like!