Wooo, that depth
#The Waltz of Empty Minds
thick mason
thick mason
Blisters & blemishes,
Scars of thy soul's strife.
Alike one for church,
Shadows whisper contrition.
The naevus of thou,
Tumour of dissent.
The man above ?
Bouleversement,
Chaos orchestrates discordant symphony.
None danced enraptured waltz,
Steps falter in deceit.
Opera grandiose,
Curtains drawn,
Masks pride,
False prestige.
Superior thy, robes of hubris,
Impudence's solipsistic art.
Thou behold thy pride,
Bridges trust crumble.
Cries of allies,
lingers,
Lost in ambition's cacophony.
Sweet melodies turned bitter,
Betrayal's poison scent.
Thou cross visionless soul's frontier,
Blinded by ambition's allure.
Every drop stained earth with ink remorse.
Sanctimonious man virtue's shroud,
Stained hands clutching.
Wisemen's dread,
Epileptic foretelling,
Tempest brewed by hand.
Delicacy ploughed,
Delicacy bred,
Thorns of deceit adorn.
Pristine apprentice felony dances,
Upon graves false gold.
Salsa 'round poison ivy,
Innocence withers shadow's gaze.
Wretched minds impaling good,
Ambition's fire unyielding.
Always lament,
Golden rust & dead,
But why ?
Virtues crumble, ideals fade,
Aftermath thy tempest's wrath.
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Blisters & blemishes,
Scars of thy soul's strife.
Alike one for church,
Shadows ...
Gorgeous!
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@gilded trout
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Beauty<3
peak elbow
I love the imagery over here!
The consistent rhymes here feels like a light wave.
fierce gazelle
Wow, this is soo great Jane!!! This somewhat reminds me of a collaboration I did with my friend and created a poem called 'Ballroom Floor, Words of War', the vibe resonates that essence. This piece is unique itself, the rhythm is almost impeccable and consistent. The maturity of words carries it gracefully which makes it more put together and poetically direct. Gorgeous work!
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@hollow juniper
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@vestal isle
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@storm radish
storm radish
This is beautiful, true art
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This is beautiful, true art
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