The Wordsmith

[delicate mason]

First

Verrry nice vocabulary on this one, the bits of repetition you use and rhyme really add to your rhythm and depth, I like it💜

a contrasting canvas of mayhem immense🔥

[pearl patio]

Absolutely love the rhyming and usage of words on this!! ✨🌸

[heady oasis]

Thank you ❤️

[sage slate]

This is really, really good!

Say, how long have you been writing?

[heady oasis]

I started last year (barely wrote about 22 poems so far)

Also, thanks!

[sage slate]

Do you have a grasp on poetry? ( as in understanding, read poetry, etc. )

Because for starting last year ( same as me, so we're buddies here ), this is astonishingly amazing!

[heady oasis]

I don't read poetries a lot, but I can write

[heady oasis]

I'm grateful

[sage slate]

Oh, we share some similarities there, too.

[heady oasis]

That is great. I'll check out yours in a while

[sage slate]

Would you like me to tag you in some of my poems?

[heady oasis]

Sure

[sage slate]

I'll tag you in three. :D

[heady oasis]

I have another poem up here. Want me to tag you in there?

[sage slate]

Is it the other one you posted on poetry feedback?

[heady oasis]

yes

[sage slate]

I'll check that out right now.

[heady oasis]

@marsh spear

[marsh spear]

👀

[heady oasis]

@civic coyote

@civic coyote

[civic coyote]

This is so elegant like every shred of your words appear nowhere near mess. The first stanza is quite impactful considering how your wondering has taken shape. I feel like rereading it. I'm almost speechless and the left words that I have is all I'm using to convey this to you. You are amazing dear so much :'> <33

[heady oasis]

@cedar elbow

[heady oasis]

@red inlet

[heady oasis]

@agile flax

@fading pagoda

[fading pagoda]

Oo seriously you have amazing talent, I love this one as well!!! Your vocab and style are just amazing

[heady oasis]

Appreciate it!

[heady oasis]

@thick basalt

@real fern

[coral carbon]

Nice