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#I Have Seen Her…
summer sluice
@torn siren
@scenic crescent
@subtle oriole
@pastel cradle
@jade jewel
@floral merlin
@ancient current
@glad gorge
@sharp shore
@marble sleet
@hasty stirrup
@dim iris
@wicked torrent
@solemn crescent
@drowsy seal
@solemn vessel
solemn vessel
solemn crescent
Absolute masterpiece!
marble sleet
beautifully expressed, good job, format is 🫰
torn siren
summer sluice
beautifully expressed, good job, format is 🫰
Thank u so much 😊
pastel cradle
*pats on the back
summer sluice
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sleek girder
Nice one. Is that a picture of hibiscus? I am unable to figure it out
summer sluice
Nice one. Is that a picture of hibiscus? I am unable to figure it out
No, it’s not a picture of hibiscus, that's her portrait. The picture is devoid of face & a defined form cuz you are supposed see (perceive/imagine) her through the poem.
mystic notch
Interesting
sleek girder
No, it’s not a picture of hibiscus, that's her portrait. The picture is devoid o...
Oh I see. Good choice
summer sluice
Oh I see. Good choice
Thanks 😊
left flame
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To me it reads as a beautiful love poem, with the speaker truly loving this woman for who she is and all she embodies; the good, the bad, and the ugly. No critiques, just praise ⭐
I am curious as to how it would read if it were gender-swapped
ashen onyxBOT
To me it reads as a beautiful love poem, with the speaker truly loving this woma...
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left flame
yayyy level one 
wicked torrent
The word choice is simply beautiful 
summer sluice
To me it reads as a beautiful love poem, with the speaker truly loving this woma...
That’s a great idea 🤔
But that may sound like I’m just praising myself lol
subtle oriole
your poem beautifully captures a journey of introspection and discovery, almost like unraveling layers of identity and experience. the imagery is vivid and evocative, painting a picture of encountering "her" in various forms—both tangible and ephemeral. the repetition of "I have seen her face to face" throughout reinforces this intimate exploration, as if each encounter reveals a new facet of this elusive yet omnipresent "her." great job really!
summer sluice
your poem beautifully captures a journey of introspection and discovery, almost ...
Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback. 😊
I truly appreciate your kind words.
summer sluice
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