#Enigmatic Puzzle
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damn
it really does feel like that love makes it so that no one but them exists
this was nicely written fr
*pats on the back
You are nowhere,
Yet everywhere you reside,
In every atom, you shimmer in splendour,
Perplexed, i ponder, how do i even render ? nice i love the structure, word choice and rhythm
Thank you so much, I’m glad you enjoyed reading it.
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rhis poem captures a profound sense of searching and wonder. the way you describe the omnipresence of the elusive figure you're seeking is really captivating. the lines "you are nowhere, / yet everywhere you reside" beautifully convey the paradox of your quest. the imagery of seeking in "mosque & temple grand" and finding in "hearts, true" brings a deep, personal touch to the spiritual journey. the mix of perplexity and reverence, especially in lines like "denial too affirms your presence, who knew!" adds a layer of philosophical depth. its a thoughtful, reflective piece that resonates with anyone who has ever questioned or sought something greater than themselves.
Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback. I truly appreciate your kind words & how deeply you connected with the theme. 😊
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The theme of this poem, I felt it's about love and bittersweet. I loved the rhythmic and metrical flow of verses. Well done! I loved the simple yet beautiful usage of words. Especially, the tone of the poem, really stands out well. Done a phenomenal job 👏
The after affect of meeting the one
True love basically
But ignored the emotion and now you look everywhere.
Really good poem describing how it be in reality
Thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot to me. 😊
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