Taste of an Apple | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

livid shadow Jul 7, 2024, 6:45 AM

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@stuck sequoia

stuck sequoia Jul 7, 2024, 6:58 AM

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i love how her simple question about apples becomes this profound metaphor for longing and unfulfilled desires. the cigarette detail is spot-on, too. it adds to the whole "detached yet contemplative" feel of your character. his nonchalant responses, like "why eat the damn thing?" and "oh, shut up," contrast perfectly with the depth of the conversation. and the ending is perfect. the realization that its not about the apple itself but the hunger and the search for something more. it ties everything together so well and leaves a lasting impression. it gives a nice touch of vulnerability to your character.

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the entire poem is beautifully written really well done!

livid shadow Jul 7, 2024, 7:45 AM

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stuck sequoia i love how her simple question about apples becomes this profound metaphor for l...

Thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot to me. It's great to hear that you enjoyed reading it. 😊

livid shadow Jul 8, 2024, 10:16 AM

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@north root

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@short yoke

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@slow flume

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@indigo coral

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@ember elk

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@stoic narwhal

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@ionic heart

livid shadow Jul 8, 2024, 12:16 PM

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@stoic narwhal

short yoke Jul 8, 2024, 1:01 PM

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awww

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great play on the "giving an apple means asking for marriage", it's very well written!

livid shadow Jul 8, 2024, 2:43 PM

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Thanks 😊

livid shadow Jul 8, 2024, 4:43 PM

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@trail prairie

livid shadow Jul 8, 2024, 8:27 PM

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@delicate salmon

delicate salmon Jul 8, 2024, 9:03 PM

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This is a very evocative poem with a lot of interesting imagery. The apple can represent many things, depending on the context. In this poem, it could symbolize temptation, forbidden knowledge, or even a simple pleasure. Amazingly written

livid shadow Jul 8, 2024, 9:53 PM

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delicate salmon This is a very evocative poem with a lot of interesting imagery. The apple can ...

Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed reading it. 😊

summer jay Jul 9, 2024, 3:04 AM

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jaw drop.

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IM SORRY WHAT I SAID AB CONVERSATIONS KISSINGS AND MUSINGS HGEGHF

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IM SORRY

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😭

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https://tenor.com/view/clown-crying-sad-gif-17901663

Tenor

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YOURE SO SWEET TO TAKE INSPIRATION FROM MY DUMB POEM

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AND ITS SO MUCH BETTER

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AND AND AND

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snot comes out of my nose

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I LOVE THEM BOTH VERY MUCH AND IM SORRY FOR BEING PASSIVE AGGRESSIVE

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gonna think ab this for a while chat

livid shadow Jul 13, 2024, 5:47 AM

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@ebon pollen

livid shadow Jul 16, 2024, 7:58 PM

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@hollow charm

hollow charm Jul 16, 2024, 7:59 PM

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(I come in peace, I come with chocolates 🍫)

livid shadow Jul 16, 2024, 7:59 PM

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hollow charm (I come in peace, I come with chocolates 🍫)

(I’ll still offer you a candy 🍭)

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@sweet pelican

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@bitter scarab

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@whole ridge

hollow charm Jul 16, 2024, 8:01 PM

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Its not about the fruit you can touch, but the hunger that keeps you searching omw to find myself an apple

livid shadow Jul 16, 2024, 8:02 PM

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@warm grove

sweet pelican Jul 16, 2024, 8:59 PM

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I love your poetry SaberSaysPretty , I might not give feedback that much, but keep on pinging me please, I love reading them. It's the picture it paints in my head, the scenery is beautiful, it's the way your character is so wonderfully portrayed, it's the feeling that seem to have lingered even when I'm done reading it once. I can't seem to just read them once and move on. bunnypeek

livid shadow Jul 17, 2024, 5:40 AM

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sweet pelican I love your poetry<:SaberSaysPretty:1216724653498957874>, I might not give feedb...

😯😯

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Now i have no words

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Damn

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And you just made my day

#Taste of an Apple