bouta get pooped on for the bad old english | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

alpine arrow Jul 4, 2024, 9:16 AM

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Thy flower shall rest in my grasp
And I shall kiss it’s yellow leaf
And thou shall feel my love
And rob me of my heart, a thief

Thy flower shines but in the moonlight
For the sun could deal its glory not
And the moon, how pretty the cool blows
When a sun deals of discomfort too lot

Thy flower tis a blessing onto my and thy mortal souls
For when miles spread between our bodies
Tis a bridge to call my and thyself home

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Hehe

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How absolutely dare tou

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I poured my heart and soul into this poem

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MODS

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BAN HIM

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HOW DARE THEE

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TIS BUT A BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN PROSE

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FRICK YOUR BLOODLINE

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KILL YOUR GOLDFISH

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I do admit im horrible with old english

night hull Jul 4, 2024, 9:33 AM

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Are you guys friends

alpine arrow Jul 4, 2024, 9:33 AM

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No i dont know him

night hull Jul 4, 2024, 9:34 AM

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Oh

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Bruh

alpine arrow Jul 4, 2024, 9:34 AM

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Who the heck are yoy

night hull Jul 4, 2024, 9:34 AM

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Tofu?

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Your only mortal enemy is chicken

alpine arrow Jul 4, 2024, 9:34 AM

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WHAT DID I DO

night hull Jul 4, 2024, 9:34 AM

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But you're the real chicken here

alpine arrow Jul 4, 2024, 9:34 AM

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night hull Your only mortal enemy is chicken

HAHA

alpine arrow Jul 4, 2024, 9:34 AM

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night hull But you're the real chicken here

Real

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WOW

night hull Jul 4, 2024, 9:34 AM

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You should run before i fry you with my breath

alpine arrow Jul 4, 2024, 9:34 AM

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Catboy too?

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Bro

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Keep some dignity

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I dont know you

onyx terrace Jul 4, 2024, 9:35 AM

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I think they're friends

night hull Jul 4, 2024, 9:36 AM

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Maybe not

onyx terrace Jul 4, 2024, 9:36 AM

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LOL

night hull Jul 4, 2024, 9:36 AM

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I was boutta go rage mode

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Kendrick typa shi

onyx terrace Jul 4, 2024, 9:37 AM

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alpine arrow Thy flower shall rest in my grasp And I shall kiss it’s yellow leaf And thou s...

beautiful poem ❤️

alpine arrow Jul 4, 2024, 9:38 AM

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onyx terrace I think they're friends

I dont know who that guy is

crystal ferry Jul 4, 2024, 9:38 AM

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He has been dealt with

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Nice poem btw.

alpine arrow Jul 4, 2024, 9:40 AM

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Thanks mate

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Would love some feedback

crystal ferry Jul 4, 2024, 9:42 AM

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I think you should change the title tho

alpine arrow Jul 4, 2024, 9:43 AM

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Naah im good with this one

mint crow Jul 4, 2024, 11:16 PM

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Thy flower shalt rest in thine grasp
And I shalt kiss it's yellow leaf
And thou shalt feel thine love
And rob me if my heart; a thief

Thy flower shines, but in the moonlight
For the sun could deal its glory not
And the moon, how pretty the cool blows
When a sun deals discomfort too lot

Thy flower, tis a blessing unto our mortal souls
For when miles spread between our bodies
Tis a bridge to call thine and thyself home

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But otherwise, it's a fine poem!

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I wouldn't worry too much about the grammar and all that

alpine arrow Jul 5, 2024, 7:02 AM

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Okay

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I hate to correct the teacher

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But thine alsso means your

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Its used before a vowel instead of thy

alpine arrow Jul 5, 2024, 7:04 AM

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mint crow Thy flower shalt rest in thine grasp And I shalt kiss it's yellow leaf And thou ...

But i appreciate everything else!

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Oh also,

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Shalt is used in the second person

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So it replaces "you shall" not "i shall"

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I did make that mistake in the poem originally but im a little shabby with my old english

mint crow Jul 5, 2024, 7:06 AM

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alpine arrow Shalt is used in the second person

Oh! Honestly, I'd have to take your word for it, as I was just going off intuition

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Forgive me for assuming haha 😂

alpine arrow Jul 5, 2024, 7:07 AM

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Its alright! But i wanna ask for you to maybe check the facts before trying to correct someone, i really appreciate the comments but it would make peoples lives easier yk?

mint crow Jul 5, 2024, 7:12 AM

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alpine arrow Its alright! But i wanna ask for you to maybe check the facts before trying to c...

Fair enough

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I half thought I was cooking, and the other half thought it would be funny to fulfill your title's prophecy

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