Unblended | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

torpid inlet Jul 2, 2024, 3:04 PM

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I’m tired of being unseen
Always being wiped away clean
Everyone else is in the spotlight
Progressing succession in evident sight
I’m unblended in the mix of adulation
Portrayed as discreetly protruded
Shameful of my hunger for attention
And thirst for pretension
The truth is I aspire to be blended
In the vast mix of attention

Common traits of ingenues
Are all glittery and pastel hues
But I shouldn’t jump into impressiveness
Especially if I don’t posses
Amusing character, outstanding talent
Solitude blocks my path of being valiant
Because of my clear disbelonging
In friend groups of persistent longing

Are the standards impossible
Or am I impossible?

oak remnant Jul 3, 2024, 7:12 AM

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The only thing impossible is a bad poem!
Looks great, I do love the connotative hardships yielded throughout the piece.
The last line hits hard too

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Nice job!

torpid inlet Jul 3, 2024, 7:14 AM

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Thank you 💜😭😭😭

mental mesa Jul 3, 2024, 8:03 AM

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Woww super nice poem!! Very nice use of words, got me searching up 😭 I feel like you portrayed the feeling rlly well and how you end the poem is rlly gooddd. I don't see any criticism to give you, however maybe disbelinging is typo of disbelonging? That's the only thing I noticed. Rlly well done again, keep it up!! 💗💗

torpid inlet Jul 3, 2024, 9:16 AM

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Oh yea 🤍🤍

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Ty

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If only people commented stuff like this instead I get 16 views

mental mesa Jul 3, 2024, 10:44 AM

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torpid inlet If only people commented stuff like this instead I get 16 views

How you see your views?

torpid inlet Jul 3, 2024, 10:45 AM

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mental mesa How you see your views?

On the reels grid

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In your profile

mental mesa Jul 3, 2024, 10:45 AM

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Oooooo yea

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I wanna start Instagram poetry account again

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Yea it's kinda trash I got like 2 likes and 80-100 views 😭

torpid inlet Jul 3, 2024, 11:29 AM

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It’s better than what I get tbh

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