#Life's Death.

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wicked lotus
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@arctic sun

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@outer sable

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@foggy beacon

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@oak yarrow

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@analog sail

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@rugged kestrel

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@sonic crater

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@modern sleet

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@wicked lotus

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@proud blaze

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@glacial shadow
@gloomy finch

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@limpid thistle

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@rugged sky

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@unreal hinge

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@wicked lotus

foggy beacon
topaz mulch
oak yarrow
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Ooh

wicked lotus
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@wicked lotus reviews pleasee

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At last tagged as the last.

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I will do my duty and review thy poem.

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I really like this poem.

Although it is somewhat romantic.

You know the drill.

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In all seriousness, great idea, great poem. 10/10.

wicked lotus
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@glass cobalt

glass cobalt
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@wicked lotus will give feedback soon
o(〃＾▽＾〃)o

wicked lotus
outer sable
wicked lotus
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@wicked lotus

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Omg this is beautiful, I have no words, like the personnafication of life and death is just stunning

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I have no complaints well done

wicked lotus
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@rugged sky

rugged sky
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read it before,loved it

arctic sun
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This is an extremely good poem, the theme is really fascinating, and your metaphors are we wonderful and creative as usual! The choice of having the poem end of a sad note is a good one. Amazing job, Aarya! ❤️❤️

wicked lotus
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@shell thunder

shell thunder
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OOooooo

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I really like the personfication of life and death here!

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it's great!

delicate sky
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"a love that could only take
never give"

ahhhhhhhhh , I'm crying 😭🙏🏼

wicked lotus
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@sonic crater

sonic crater
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damn death actually killing life is so dramatic and I am so here for it, the metaphors are great and you excelled in the personification💜

wicked lotus
hot harbor
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Quite a long one

hot harbor
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That was

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Such a ride

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I could clearly visualise everything

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Amazing metaphors

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And it was like

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Genuinely such a creative theme

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Good job!!

wicked lotus
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Thank you so much :)

sage imp
hot harbor
sage imp
hot harbor
sage imp
hot harbor
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Wdym?

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I'm here

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I read your poems

sage imp
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You didn’t got my tags ?

sage imp
hot harbor
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I didd

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I liked your poems

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I'm sorry I couldn't give any feedback earlier

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But yes

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I loved them

wicked lotus