Sublime kiss… | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

short verge Jul 2, 2024, 4:48 AM

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thin violet Jul 21, 2024, 6:06 AM

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Very nice poem

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I love it

short verge Jul 21, 2024, 6:07 AM

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thin violet Very nice poem

Thank u 😊

crude grove Jul 21, 2024, 6:10 AM

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Nice!! Hmm I wonder how it would read if you changed the last line from “collection” to “exhibition”

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Like an art exhibition

short verge Jul 21, 2024, 6:12 AM

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crude grove Nice!! Hmm I wonder how it would read if you changed the last line from “collect...

This is one of the first few poem’s that I posted on this server 🤯

short verge Jul 21, 2024, 6:12 AM

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crude grove Like an art exhibition

🤔

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Exhibition of moments sealed with a….

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@brave spear

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@crude forge

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@tribal wharf

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@trail parrot

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@leaden citrus

trail parrot Jul 21, 2024, 6:20 AM

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Ooooo

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That’s cool!

short verge Jul 21, 2024, 6:22 AM

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@gloomy fulcrum

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@knotty coral

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@random galleon

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@burnt otter

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@safe vortex

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@trail crow

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@gusty finch

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@mint vigil

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@agile river

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@real laurel

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@wide matrix

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@shell lance

brave spear Jul 21, 2024, 6:39 AM

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short verge <@846794080645939230>

I'VE BEEN SUMMONED

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The 1st and 2nd stanza is 👌👌

short verge Jul 21, 2024, 6:41 AM

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brave spear The 1st and 2nd stanza is 👌👌

And the remaining two ?😲

shell lance Jul 21, 2024, 6:46 AM

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S-S-S-SUBLIME!!!

brave spear Jul 21, 2024, 6:47 AM

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short verge And the remaining two ?😲

They are good too but the 1st 2 hits the best

short verge Jul 21, 2024, 6:48 AM

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brave spear They are good too but the 1st 2 hits the best

Damn you

brave spear Jul 21, 2024, 6:51 AM

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Compliment dene par bhi damn you 😭

short verge Jul 21, 2024, 7:03 AM

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brave spear Compliment dene par bhi damn you 😭

😂

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You don’t like damn you ? What you prefer damn girl ?

brave spear Jul 21, 2024, 7:08 AM

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short verge You don’t like **damn you** ? What you prefer **damn girl ?**

Yess. Damn you sounded like you're cussing me out T.T

short verge Jul 21, 2024, 7:14 AM

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brave spear Yess. Damn you sounded like you're cussing me out T.T

Nooooo

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😲

burnt otter Jul 21, 2024, 7:14 AM

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In the galleries of our mind,
we all are bound,
Every single memory, like a painting,
vivid & true,
A concoction of moments,
old & new. 🫰 so true

short verge Jul 21, 2024, 7:14 AM

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brave spear Yess. Damn you sounded like you're cussing me out T.T

Here have some 🍭 🍬

brave spear Jul 21, 2024, 7:15 AM

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short verge Here have some 🍭 🍬

Thank you!

short verge Jul 21, 2024, 9:34 AM

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@marsh fossil

tepid mountain Jul 21, 2024, 1:14 PM

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AAA I LOVE IT

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it sounds so comforting to read somehow

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The few rhymes fit perfectly

short verge Jul 21, 2024, 1:19 PM

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tepid mountain AAA I LOVE IT

Thank you so much, I’m glad you enjoyed reading it. 😊

trail crow Jul 21, 2024, 2:43 PM

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"Some of us…
carry scars etched deep within,
of stories where we have been.
Cursed are we, by this gift of memory,
blessing & burden." beautiful Harshk! I love reading all your poems! :D

short verge Jul 21, 2024, 3:22 PM

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trail crow "*Some of us… carry scars etched deep within, of stories where we have been. Cur...

Thank you dear 😊

wide matrix Jul 22, 2024, 7:57 PM

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I feel so connected to this one I love it so much

short verge Jul 22, 2024, 7:58 PM

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wide matrix I feel so connected to this one I love it so much

I’m glad you enjoyed reading it. 😊

gusty finch Jul 25, 2024, 5:12 PM

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Never felt more relatable to a poem more than this

short verge Jul 25, 2024, 5:18 PM

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gusty finch Never felt more relatable to a poem more than this

You just made my day…thank you ❤️

short verge Aug 9, 2024, 2:35 PM

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@brave spear (re tag)

#Sublime kiss…