#vol.5-7

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unkempt raptor
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A floral pulse

“Down again?” Asked spike
“Just lost..” Beast answered with depravation
Rose frets on beast for his fur is pale and his claws are dull

The blood of the tulip and the songs of the rose
Breeze flows
Sky fades
Roses thrive all around
A single Tulip stuck in the maze
Tulip cries in a frenzy
“Why so blue?” Rose asks
“I just wish i could be better and grow just like you.”

Rainfall for the rustling leaves (unfinished)
Songs from the birds are like music to my ears but is nothing compared to the vibrance of the roses.

The true NIRVANA

Deprived
Starved
Motion picture
I cant stop the feeling if this hell
“Where is snake?” Calls the frog
“Dont worry theyll be here soon..” says the beast, dreading and longing for snake.
Tears fall, scratches made, disappointment arises, and calling with a strike if help

flat needle
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what is it about exactly?

unkempt raptor
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Its all about my breakup and relationship and also my battles with addictions

tough fiberBOT
flat needle
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well its okay

unkempt raptor
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Is it good?

flat needle
unkempt raptor
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I knew it!! It sound slike a 6 year old😭😭

flat needle
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its not that baddddddddddddd

unkempt raptor
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Rate it /10

flat needle
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some the words just uh needs reshaping

unkempt raptor
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Ik but its hard since my brain doesnt work properly

flat needle
unkempt raptor
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Its fine

flat needle
unkempt raptor
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Yeah i do all the time

flat needle
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u proof read?

unkempt raptor
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Sometimes but i get sad because im not good at it

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Im weak im sorry
😅

flat needle
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no no its okayy

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are you new at writing? (i dont mean this in a harsh way)

unkempt raptor
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Yeah i been doing it for 3 weeks

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But i write my own stories just never really did poems till noe

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Now*

vocal pythonBOT
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*But i write my own

stories just never really

did poems till noe*

- enterblouhhere
unkempt raptor
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OMGG THE HAIKUBOT IS SO ANNOYING

flat needle
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thats alrighttttttttt

flat needle
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you'll get use to it

unkempt raptor
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Yeah
And thanks

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But how to i refine it or make my poems better?

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Like my vocabulary is limited to “i want chicken nuggets”

flat needle
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haha thats alright

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you need to find your writing style

flat needle
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thats could be a part of your writing style

unkempt raptor
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How do i find my writing style?

flat needle
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you write and it'll come naturally

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you'll notie that its easier to work with or you'll see a pattern of some stuff

unkempt raptor
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I mostly write about nature and animals and blah blah blah

flat needle
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mines is that sometimes ill rhyme or my line will lead and will be based for an entire stanza

unkempt raptor
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Fr

flat needle
unkempt raptor
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Oki

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And thank you so much

flat needle
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thats one of mines