The Moon’s Secrets.

[zealous spear]

I found myself in a blissful clearing,
Wind makes me unsure of what I’m hearing,
The sky above holds natures mirror,
Displaying images that make me wither,

Daylight disguises the tears in my eyes,
Kindly so - muffling my cries,
After some time in the west it has set,
Invading my mind; that day we met.

Silently I grasp the remote so firmly,
It nearly breaks as I play my termly
Time of broken breathing and choke,
On regretful rapture in all this smoke,

Reflections that only the night can see,
But at least the moon, is here with me,
It holds me close as she once did,
For that feeling I would surely bid,
My worthless life repeatedly,
If it meant that she could be here with me.

[zealous spear]

@orchid dew @wintry thorn

@vapid harbor @vagrant drift @cobalt aspen

[cobalt aspen]

Your poems bring me comfort, they bring a sense of surrealism and just suddenly makes me feel aware of everything, I can't describe it, in other words they're amazing

[wintry thorn]

damnn this poem really conveys a sense of loneliness, longing, and regret, as u reflects on a past love

[empty flicker]

Wonderful! @wintry thorn has just pregressed to level 12!

[wintry thorn]

the "blissful clearing" and a "mirror" in the sky really convey a feeling of peace and beauty, but the mention of "tears in my eyes" and "regretful rapture" reveal ur inner turmoil

The last four lines really express a deep desire for that person to return and a willingness to sacrifice everything for that person's presence, like damn