Love whatever you used to make this. Reminds me of Minecraft a bit?
#These Eyes
slow fulcrum
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slow fulcrum
This definitely is a good poem, you’re getting you message out, you have a good title, overall there is a sound story coming out of this. Just the only thing throwing me off is the rhyme scheme? May want to look over it a little? Aside from that, beautiful poem you got going on there.
jaunty valley
Thank you so much <3 I'm really glad you liked it. I didn't really have a rhyme scheme in mind as I just wrote and rhymed where I wanted, but I'll look over that and see if i can improve on that! :D
Also, the app I used to type this poem out is called DrawNote! But you need its relatively cheap premium version to have that text font i used <3
slow fulcrum
Thank you so much <3 I'm really glad you liked it. I didn't really have a rhyme ...
Ahhh that is super cool, I’ll take a look at it later
slow fulcrum
The lines rhyme is a lot better compared to before. I love this a lot, pretty good job Kevs 
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jaunty valley
visual daggerBOT
https://tenor.com/view/oscars-standing-ovation-clap-clapping-applause-gif-508955...
Wonderful! @manic belfry has just pregressed to level 1!
jaunty valley
HI BESTIE
jaunty valley
https://tenor.com/view/oscars-standing-ovation-clap-clapping-applause-gif-508955...
OMG TYY <3
manic belfry
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jaunty valley
:D
jaunty valley
@fluid plover short lil poem, its a redo of one of my OLD poems
fluid plover
Original: While your imagery was still strong your rhyme scheme absolutely killed you here
Edited: This one doesn't have the same power as your later works, which is totally understandable, the imagery is still there in a weaker essence but I'm glad your later works weren't restricted to rhyme schemes in this way💜
jaunty valley
yeah the rhyme scheme was on life support
fluid plover
yeah the rhyme scheme was on life support
Don't worry I abandoned AABB so quickly
jaunty valley
I just wrote a poem today with AABB :'>
fluid plover
I just wrote a poem today with AABB :'>
👀
jaunty valley
I'll post it
jaunty valley
Original: While your imagery was still strong your rhyme scheme absolutely kille...
I'm gonna scrap this one for I don't really see it as a complete poem to my liking, I wrote it when i was having a writer's block (and decided to just rewrite old poems a bit)
so I will write a complete and proper poem on "These Eyes" once I get the motivation for it :D
fluid plover
I'm gonna scrap this one for I don't really see it as a complete poem to my liki...
Now come voice your poems in vc