almost fifteen. | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

waxen panther Jun 27, 2024, 12:53 PM

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@barren nova
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@toxic mulch

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@halcyon schooner

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@toxic mulch

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@golden flame

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@obtuse osprey

obtuse osprey Jun 27, 2024, 12:58 PM

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I got hella deja vu here (I'm pretty sure I've already read this somewhere.

But I gotta say it's stunning!!
From composition to content and context..
I'm in awe!

Absolutely breathtaking!!

Keep it up!!

10/10

atomic heathBOT Jun 27, 2024, 1:00 PM

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Wonderful! @plucky portal has just pregressed to level 3!

toxic mulch Jun 27, 2024, 2:49 PM

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almost fifteen? more like almost too old

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https://tenor.com/view/made-in-abyss-ozen-smug-anime-gif-18658794

Tenor

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KIDDING

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5 yos is the max-

waxen panther Jun 27, 2024, 3:03 PM

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toxic mulch 5 yos is the max-

Bruh💀

halcyon schooner Jun 28, 2024, 1:38 AM

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wow... ur poem realy paints a vivid and tragic picture of a young boy's death and his parents' response. the way u use imagery like "a sad face" and "emerald eyes so keen," along with the "fiery ember" that "gulped down his head," and the parents' "misty eyes" and "howling sighs,".... wow, it really creates a sense of foreboding and sadness

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and the last stanza, revealing the boy's relief in death, adds complexity and deepens the tragedy blursob

#almost fifteen.