#My Paper Husband

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You held me in your paper hands
and kissed my wet skin
Soaking the liquid, love ubiquitous
Comfort on repeat.
Sitting in my cotton bed,
lowered my head and knees.
Scribbling down furiously
Not enraged, just poetry
You touch me in ways only
the heart gave
But I still feel lonely.
Did you bestow me affection
or was it my own inflection?
This madman calligraphy
can't have been chivalry
Not from a man, but a book
A book in my hand.
You're just my journal.
And I'm such a girl.
Writing on these blue lines.
Hiding my fragmented mind.
My paper husband,
I spill to you
all that is me.
Take it with your moleskin.
Naked carnosity.

languid imp
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wow, just wow. that was insane. it flowed so well, such advance vocabulary, making it even more moving and beautiful.

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@ancient cape

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@vital dew

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@tired plume

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god some of ur names are rlly hard to remember im gonna have to start enlisting nicknames

vital dew
# spark breach You held me in your paper hands and kissed my wet skin Soaking the liquid, love ...

ohh my gosh this is beautiful and i have so many feelings on it AUGH

i've seen so many people talk about wanting a love that cares for who they are, not for how they appear, and i feel like this captures that desire so beautifully

it's a husband, a companion, because it listens; because it holds who you truly are, it holds your emotions, the conjurings of your very mind; and that, unfortunately, is something that not all husbands of flesh do

and the dialogue of "am i just projecting some sort of genuine care?" is such a touching one aaaa

absolutely love it

vital dew
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absolutely.

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"and the dialogue of "am i just projecting some sort of genuine care?" is such a touching one aaaa " HELPP I THOUGHT THIS WAS AN ACTUAL LINE IN MY POEM AND I WAS LIKE damnnn where did i write that thats kinda fire

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and it was js a rephrase LMOAOOA how come u writing the poem better than me huh 🤨

vital dew
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I COULD NEVER

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tired plume
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Or write it w blood on your wall

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oh wait she did!

tired plume
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its kinda eating tho (not like in a cannibal way)

tired plume
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We starting good w paper hands but paper hands and wet skin...do you wanna destroy your lover? (JkjJk i love the metaphor
ALSO "scribbling down furiously/not enraged, js poetry" you describing everyone in this server love it richyellowman
Ngl the title sounds like a mitski song and im here for it i feel like this could be her lyrics

final kiln
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Last line goes hard as HELL

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I love it too, because it's got layers of interpretation

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It can be taken literally, as if you were writing about your need for poetry

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And it can be taken figuratively, as if you were writing about your relationship

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But they're both viable interpretations, and in either depiction, the views are honest and candid

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"ALSO "scribbling down furiously/not enraged, js poetry" you describing everyone in this server love it richyellowman " called u coocoos out on that one blursob

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tired plume
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or wtvr idk hes a writer or smth

tired plume