White horse (Written on 6/22/24) by Vindicator

[wary snow]

*In this peculiar
And monstrous fantasy
There appeared to be a white horse.

He gallops, the spiky green
As he glitters under the beautiful rain.
Though I encounter this blue mist.

The blue mist shadows the sun's radiance.
How could my love be this polluted ?
The white horse ignites a sudden light

Where the mournful leaves are discontented
And coiled in black thorns.
And the white horse asks nothing.

In this blue and ghastly mist
I escaped.
My fingers quiver in tinted bliss.

The white horse suddenly
Became violent towards the sunset.
His heart often carves mulberries.

But will my love ever be the same
Under this ceremony of white ?*

[wary snow]

@leaden elk

@royal turret

@mystic parrot

@onyx quail

@jaunty briar

@granite plaza

@tulip spade

@analog dew

@solid bronze

@uncut holly

@sick vessel

[wary snow]

@regal fossil

[wary snow]

@tawny vapor

[granite plaza]

wow this poem... it's incredibly descriptive, and the imagery, the use of color is really smt beautiful

It really captures a specific feeling, a certain emotion that I can't quite describe

It's a very unique poem, and the words used are wonderfully descriptive

It's truly a beautiful piece of work!!

[tulip spade]

This poem is a curious one. I don't get the underlying story but the descriptions are good.

[regal fossil]

Awh another amazing poem by vindi! It's really good as usual!
(Vindi came to bless us with 3 poems in a row)

[uncut holly]

In this blue and ghastly mist
From this blue and ghastly mist

*In this peculiar
And monstrous fantasy
There appeared to be a white horse.

He gallops, the spiky green
As he glitters under the beautiful rain.
Though, I encounter this blue mist.*

These are good lines, are white horse and I different? In this case, the white horse is some inspiration for the I?

Under this ceremony of white? > this line confuse me