Atmospherical - Slush

[fading orchid]

The lungs of a mother are restricted at the hands of her burning son
The greenhouse that she sits in falls victim to unwelcome pests
She waits for the chance to breathe
She waits for the chance to thrive

Betrayal in the eyes of a mother
Is something she must naturally get over
Her instincts overwhelm her conscious
Even if it’s illogical
For her son is what she revolves
For her son is what she must aid

She is protected by her daughter
Luna, the defender of her crust
Keep the attacks at bay
Protect your dependent from her sons ruthless control
But the progression of time guarantees
They will both fall to him

[short garden]

“The greenhouse she sits in falls victim to unwelcome pests” STUNNING
tell me why I read and analysed this in a stewie voice

[fading orchid]

that’s kind of how it was processing in my head as i wrote it LOL

[sage pulsar]

*that’s kind of how it

was processing in my head

as i wrote it LOL*

- slushnobi

[fading orchid]

the pfp rots the brain

[short garden]

I’m debating doing a Peter griffin pfp
But that might change the meanings of all of my poems

[fading orchid]

https://tenor.com/view/peter-twirl-peter-griffin-peter-dress-peter-griffin-twirl-peter-griffin-dress-gif-26131081

he’s a poet at heart

[fading orchid]

@sullen lynx like

[glossy zealot]

wow this poem is well-written and gets its msg across clearly! The way u use the imagery of the mother struggling to breathe and the greenhouse being attacked by pests really creates a feeling of danger and vulnerability