paper.

[past tusk]

@mint falcon @kindred shale @mint falcon @mint falcon

[kindred shale]

*pats on the back

[mint falcon]

I will read in a bit

[past tusk]

@edgy token @novel brook

[edgy token]

wow ur poem has beautiful imagery and details that make it feel vivid!

The questions u ask make it thoughtful and reflective. like the way u write "is it a..." , it kinda highlights the uncertainty abt whether outward signs of happiness show true inner feelings

the way ur comparing happiness to rain and paper boats brings a playful, childlike touch, which contrasts with the serious questions.

Overall, i think it’s a thought provoking and moving poem, i like it

[past tusk]

thank yooo :3

[past tusk]

@formal jacinth

[small oyster]

Ah I like the imagery! The mood shift from stanza 2 to 3 is interesting, it went from blue-ish to reddish-ochre to me. Lots of references to masking emotions, as well as paper origami, which are known to be fickle to the elements. Afterall, mo matter how pretty they are, t the end of the day, they are still paper, which would melt in water. No matter how you display yourself, your true nature never really dissolves(pun-intended)