#Apple tree
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little wolf
Oh nice
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Haiku lord after so long
I was not free for some time.
Tried a new style
Well the first two stanzas are connected
Then the next two
Then last one is completely different
So I wasn't able to contemplate the interconection
But if i would have to draw meaning it would be
A common thing tree
First para talks about the positive side
Nd second the revolutionary deed third talks about the night situation when it stands alone and nd fourth talks about seeking answers in life and go through the bitter path
But 5th is like being away from all that in peace ignoring all the things of world
Use of different fruits showing that they are away from knowledge of apple tree (means the symbolism it's used for)
I'M SORRY FOR THAT'S NOT A GOOD FEEDBACK BUT U ALREADY KNOW ME
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meager axle
Love it!
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Well the first two stanzas are connected
Then the next two
Then last one is co...
Yeah that's what I tried(NEW STYLE)
just asked my 5 different friends to say some 5 random words
They ranted about it so I wrote it 😦
I tried to connect but..
The apple tree means the one where Newton sat
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I'M SORRY FOR THAT'S NOT A GOOD FEEDBACK BUT U ALREADY KNOW ME
I love these kind ok feedback 😊
Thank You. I'll get a chance to improve myself
hollow spear
Once again you write
Like a king of poetry
I love all the works
vernal cryptBOT
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Also I’m loving the new template/style
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Also I’m loving the new template/style
Bows
Thanks for reading. Hoped it brought some inspiration to write
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I like this!!! It's sweet, concrete with simplicity and yet has a sense of depth :)) Good work HaikuLord!