#With Beauty...
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Ooh that was quick
Damn, absolutely love love love this fragment of your soul, you get a star, the imagery and personification is just so astounding and beautiful.
Feedback: I would add some more line breaks and variation of line length if you planned to narrate this but it's still beautiful
I'm glad you liked it! I'll be sure keep your feedback in mind! And narrating is not a bad idea 👀
10/10 I would narrate this too
I would absolutely love to hear that 💜