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#Her Poet X
sharp storm
@granite kestrel
@royal heath
@full creek
@cyan scarab
@twilit jewel
@zenith cradle
@supple swift
@dusty thorn
@hybrid kernel
@broken oriole
@primal estuary
@mellow glacier
@dusty thorn
@drowsy dock
@carmine pecan
@languid crescent
@exotic juniper
@oak aspen
@somber goblet
@dusty thorn
@inner yarrow
@royal ridge
@vital gale
@stone elk
@tawdry summit
@velvet turtle
@delicate gust
@queen anvil
@dusty mortar
@long rapids
@outer canyon
cyan scarab
Got abs there
royal ridge
sharp storm
Got abs there
was just thinking of "her" working out too much
full creek
was just thinking of "her" working out too much
-----and i-
cyan scarab
was just thinking of "her" working out too much
Huh
sharp storm
-----and i-
ma storm how have you been storming
full creek
ma storm how have you been storming
storming as i just finished writing and editing and posting 11 poems on my blogsite
sharp storm
storming as i just finished writing and editing and posting 11 poems on my blogs...
hmm
velvet turtle
@sharp storm This poem is lovely, but the subject matter is kinda sensitive, would you mind moving it? https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1056779405491453992
delicate gust
How mamy more dude?.
sharp storm
How mamy more dude?.
Till death has the best of me.
velvet turtle
<@760850102729834549> This poem is lovely, but the subject matter is kinda sensi...
@sharp storm actually, there are rules, if you wanna keep it here, maybe you can edit out the sensitive parts?
dusty thorn
Her poet, you're broken beyond repair ma bruh, splendid poem though, also, W gains flex
sharp storm
Her poet, you're broken beyond repair ma bruh, splendid poem though, also, W gai...
tag me
ma bruh
tawdry summit
even these clothes despise me now🔥 your writing is always so powerful
sharp storm
*even these clothes despise me now*🔥 your writing is always so powerful
*gibs violets
dusty thorn
The use of imagery and metaphors is powerful and adds depth to the emotions being conveyed. The contrast between the speaker's feelings of worthlessness and the desire for love and acceptance is poignant. The poem evokes a sense of melancholy and heartache, and the ending leaves a lasting impact. The use of repetition in the last lines also reinforces the sense of longing and loss. Overall, the poem is a compelling and evocative expression of emotional turmoil.
sharp storm
The use of imagery and metaphors is powerful and adds depth to the emotions bein...
ma sufi it's been a while huh
dusty thorn
ma sufi it's been a while huh
Actually my first account was hacked, so I created new account
sharp storm
Actually my first account was hacked, so I created new account
I see
dusty thorn
Yes brother
long rapids
to me, this poem shows how it feels to be very sad and hopeless using strong pictures and comparisons
the way u talk abt "a void within" and "a dark space" to describe feeling empty and alone
sharp storm
to me, this poem shows how it feels to be very sad and hopeless using strong pic...
bruh it's literally me in there wdym strong 😭
long rapids
bruh it's literally me in there wdym strong 😭
when i say picture, i dont mean the literal image
i mean like how i can picture it
it creates a vivid picture or image in the reader's mind, not talking about your literal picture above there
sharp storm
😭
stone elk
*Movies bore me, I watch delusions- better
I see in a leather pot- some heather…
“What delusions do you see beyond?”
Me and you my love…Us together. * Ok this was quite smooth
sharp storm
Do you forgive me now ma madame? @outer canyon
twilit jewel
@broken falcon
broken falcon
THIS SUCKS