If not a Graveyard

[dense swallow]

A confession or a confrontation, for which I got executed.

[rugged flare]

we are ghost riding a bony structure with a meat cushioning while flying through space on a rock

its crazy

and the more I feel we remove ourselvesfrom reality the more we just become ghosts instead of alll of the above

[dense swallow]

Interesting, thanks for reading!

@wooden flare

@wheat galleon

[dense swallow]

@cold goblet

@cinder pilot

[dense swallow]

@dense swallow

@dense swallow

@rich sierra

@dense swallow

@regal gazelle

[wheat galleon]

The theme here is very, very relatable...

I used to feel this exact same way

Like I was more of a ghost than a person

Like I was led through each day by some sort of 'mental autopilot' in my brain

Living just to live

Break out of this, trust me, anyone can do it 🙂

Great job!!

[dense swallow]

I wish that happens

[dense swallow]

Thank you Sir

[dense swallow]

this is so insipidly beautiful it's coarse rough sour and I love it!

[wooden flare]

damn puff
i can feel the weight of your words deeply. the imagery of dead walking the streets and the existential questioning hit hard. when you describe becoming a poet with "expressive crimes" and facing judgment, it mirrors the inner battles we all face. this poem is hauntingly beautiful, capturing that sense of disconnection and longing for understanding. its raw, real, and incredibly moving. great job!

[dense swallow]

Thank youuuu David!! Means a lot :))

[dense swallow]

Not me writing that while having my breakdown concert lol but seriously thank you, Zeno. Makes me realize that even when I'm high on meds and sleep deprivation I can be comprehended in such a deeper level. Thank you so much T-T

[wooden flare]

oh you cannot underestimate one's skills ESPECIALLY while during a breakdown or when sleep depreciated

the poetic part of a person is at its peak during those times

[silk iris]

*the poetic part

of a person is at its

peak during those times*

- zeno0908

[dense swallow]

Indeed, I should get that in my underestimated depressed non puff friendly head :))

[wooden flare]

😭 haha

[dense swallow]

@dense swallow

[wild wing]

I loved this poem, the theme is so intellectually juicy and I loved how you expressed it! Be sure to tag me in more of your philosophical poems

[dense swallow]

Aw thank you!! Sure I'll ping you in my works. I appreciate your feedback :))