For Your Every Fight

[shrewd bolt]

A letter to everyone fighting with their mental health issues.

[wet niche]

Your words offered a blend of support, patience, and a shared understanding of pain. I have mental health issues and I can say that I loved your poem. Thanks for writing this.

[tidal bobcat]

wow, this is a beautiful and emotive poem. the imagery of waiting outside the "dungeon" and offering to take the other person's hand is really powerful

the lines "now, shall we cry together honey / for our inevitable sacred doom?" are particularly poignant. this poem speaks to a deep connection and understanding between the speaker and the person they're addressing, and it's clear that their bond is strong and built on shared pain and emotion. This is a great work!!!

[tidal bobcat]

the imagery of the "complex fight" and the offer to "cry together" is really powerful and speaks to the solidarity and understanding between those struggling with mental health issues

the msg of waiting and offering support until the other person is ready to come outside and enjoy the sunrise is a beautiful and hopeful one

thank u for writing such a moving and empathetic poem!

[shrewd bolt]

Omg thank youuuuuu sooo much!!!! Your words really mean a lot, I'm glad my words were able to reach you the way I wanted them to convey. I appreciate your feedback ❤️ T-T

[shrewd bolt]

Thanks a bunch!!

[shrewd bolt]

I'm so happy to read this really, I know how it feels as I struggle with it too. Thank youu so much, I'm glad you felt supported!!

[tidal bobcat]

Ur very welcome! it's always a wonderful feeling when someone connects with ur words and understands the message yr trying to convey!! i could tell from reading ur poem that u wrote it with a lot of emotion and empathy, so i'm glad that came across.
And i'm sorry to hear that u struggle with mental health issues as well, but it's really admirable that yr channeling those emotions into ur writing in a way that can be helpful and supportive for others. keep using ur words to make a difference!

[shrewd bolt]

Thank you for your kind words, I believe I'll keep them alive in my heart. Thank you for your expression too, who knew everyone is so similar yet prejudiced against. You letting me know this is heartfelt. Keep making the difference with your words too!

@dusky crown

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@opaque belfry

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@steep saffron

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@ionic crown

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@brazen wing

[ionic crown]

thanks i guess

nice poem.

[shrewd bolt]

You're welcome

@soft adder

[soft adder]

AWWEE

IMMA CRY

ITS SO SWEET

[shrewd bolt]

Awwwiee thank you ❤️

[soft adder]

💚

[uncut radish]

needed this and Im definitley a rolling stone

[shrewd bolt]

Aww pizza you got this <33 feel free to reach out if ever want to

[uncut radish]

for sure, thank you!

[shrewd bolt]

Aha!
Loved this one
Ngl

[feral condor]

Wonderful! @shrewd bolt has just pregressed to level 18!

[shrewd bolt]

Thanks a bunch Kin!!

[brazen wing]

Such an interesting one... This does leave room for interpretation, quite a lot of it. I really loved it!

Minor nitpick, it would be more correct to say "whom" in the 4th and 5th lines

Either way, phenomenal poem as always, Puff 🙂

[shrewd bolt]

Ah got that! Thank you for pointing that out!

[dusky crown]

ALRIGHT the dialogue with "ms. simple" sets the stage for a heartfelt connection, making the reader feel like they're part of an intimate conversation. the imagery of waiting outside the dungeon and the promise to enjoy a sunrise together create a powerful contrast between darkness and hope. your words convey a sense of patience and unconditional support, which is really comforting the lines about taking your time but not losing it, and visiting the rock at the bottom, evoke a profound understanding of struggle and the journey toward healing.
this poem is a heartfelt testament to love and support in the face of adversity. great work!!!

[shrewd bolt]

I really wished I could receive something similar in my low times, something like this and I never want others to go through the same things so I expressed it here. I'm glad this work was able to reach hearts and minds that can't take a break from self destruction. Thank you for breaking up this piece, I feel like I was able to achieve what I wanted. Thank you so much dear

[dusky crown]

of course :) i hope you do receive something similar in your low times you so deserve it

[feral condor]

Wonderful! @dusky crown has just pregressed to level 9!

[shrewd bolt]

@shrewd bolt For you

[shrewd bolt]

Thank you so much:( I really needed this

[shrewd bolt]

@shrewd bolt
I was off for some time so I could not reply to the pings
wait have I missed something? It's a new style of writing, isn't it?
I liked it...

[leaden urchin]

"Oh dear, for whom are you bleeding?
Whom are you hurting for?" this makes me question so many things- I love this.

[shrewd bolt]

That's fine I was off too

I've been trying prose poetry and lyrical poetry as well so this was a real random! Glad you enjoyed it :))

[shrewd bolt]

Thank youuuuu Fedya! Glad you felt things from my words <33