#Keep Me Up
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Really good poem , I really liked last phrase .
Gives Lassi to her
This Lassi for your great poem
Aw thank youuu, Mr. Perry!!
Takes the drink, thanking
@trail thicket
@fair lichen
@smoky yarrow
@strong gull
@woeful wedge
@mild light
@cold shoal
@exotic nymph
Hmmm.... Plea of a dying lover.
It is a nice poem.
I don't see any dramatic irony, or something. So a simple and nice poem.
Message is delievered.
Good poem, overall. 7.5/10.
Thanksss Shar!
hey nice poem! And congrats for becoming a member of staff!
Thank youu David!!!
David! Your name's David?
it's the angliced version of Davide I Just like to be called David on discord lol
Ciao!
@exotic nymph
@lucid glade
@north slate
@exotic nymph
@rich ice
@formal glen
@grim scaffold
@exotic nymph I wonder your opinion on this
i am honored
i shall read this
as long as it's not romance it's probably a 10/10
it might seem crazy what i'm bout to say...
Lol
Go ahead
wow a 10/10 poem
Oh what a loss
(THANK YOUUUU <3)
Thanks a bunch Haiku Lord!!!
Thank you Skugi!