#Her Poet V

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naive sluice
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I think I need to turn you down
I think you are way too impeditive
I think I need to calm it down
I think I need that sedative.
Hate me
Loving me is not enough girl you gotta
Berate me
Bait me
With your words you really had to shame me
Leaving me girl you had to pain me
Date me
Hinting me is not enough
girl you gotta name me.

You made me a fiend now
I'm doing all these crimes girl
Breaking hearts doing drugs
I ran out of my wines girl-
Deafening- These chimes girl
Mimicking - these mimes girl
Remember-
The time when you came back-
November-
The time when I signed you all my paychecks-
Tiring
So so so tiring, all those rainless nights of monsoon
And your goddamn rainchecks-
*sighs
AAJAO NA
But it's allright
It's all so so fine girl-
I still reminisce-
The time when you were mine girl-
When you said that "I love you yeah.. Hahaha,. I know it sounds crazy but- I love you."
When you say that you missed me
Do you remember all those night calls
The ones when you kissed me-
Remedy-
I want you as my remedy-
||You killed me||
You had me write you this threnody
Ban me-
Ban me from your heart girl
I'm blackness
I'm taking away all of your shine girl-
Delusions
That I think you will come back
But you won't and I goddamn know that-
||What thefuq||
Is my worth lesser than a dime girl-
Writing you-
I'm tired of these poems and these rhymes girl-
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Love you meri jaan
Have a good fuqing life
I gave you 7 lives and you left in 8 times girl.
Bye.

Signing off-
Her Poet

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@oblique steppe
@light kernel
@granite kayak
@urban hill
@whole jewel

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@distant narwhal
@royal frigate
@agile star
@boreal mica
@urban hill

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@tribal crypt
@random prism
@strange ember
@tawdry granite
@long badger

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@stoic stratus
@warm raft
@urban crypt
@prisma crescent
@fervent pelican

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@wide galleon
@acoustic sable
@worldly barn
@proper geyser
@cedar crane

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@urban hill
@hazy halo
@urban hill
@urban hill
@hasty agate

distant narwhal
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Wow….floored again. ✨✨✨🤌🏽🤌🏽🤌🏽 🔥

alpine zephyr
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@naive sluice I think i didn't read part 2
Ping me there pls
Imma read them all
(I already read 1 and have 3 4 5 added)

worldly barn
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wow ok with the song, that was wonderful

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you should start making music

prisma crescent
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Absolutely freaking stunning.

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Loved every bit of it

urban hill
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Would say i like it but love poem 0/10

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joking. 10/10.

agile star
naive sluice
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I sung it

hardy grove
naive sluice
hardy grove
strange ember
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Amazing

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Whens part 6 though

naive sluice
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@sudden ravine

agile star
naive sluice
agile star
naive sluice
tawdry granite
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*pats
*Good rhythm
*Starting rhyme was good
*Repetition add more power in your style
*It will be more of an emotional song and rap
*Claps
*Leaves

sudden ravine
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I read this in Corpse-Husbands voice for some reason I don't know why-

naive sluice
tribal crypt
oblique steppe
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@clever junco

steady shadow
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I understand the melody this was supposed to encapture and I find the themes of self destruction powerful

naive sluice
steady shadow