#Trying free verse

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solemn pond
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But by Serendipity I met you

to delight in another
The sole testament to the soul
A proven kiss of life

Love is complex
The way roots sink and drink
Dark, tenderly

I fell for you
The way a leaf falls
Swaying slightly, then fluttering, twirling, or gliding
Slowly, then quickly

You caught me in your hands
Gentle as a mother
Why I already loved you
There in your grasp

How lucky I was I did not know

rapid gulch
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Loved it! What really grabbed me were the descriptive words used and your leaf analogy that was presented.