#"Dried ink" — Book.

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meager fox
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@outer sail @orchid marten

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This poem is so sweet, comparing love to a cherished book
And wow I love the imagery of unwavering devotion, very touching

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And the style is just life Kafka

meager fox
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Thankss. I actualy came up with this while reading Kafka book :))

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Cool

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I usually come up with ideas when listening to enya

meager fox
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I dont know her. Would you name any of her songs for me?

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“The humming”

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“Echoes in the rain”

meager fox
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Okay

meager fox
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The humming gives me the vibes of "Army dreamers"

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Also Lana Del Rey is very good
I’m sure you’ve heard of her
Songs like margeret, white mustang

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meager fox
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Okay I’ll do that

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Fo you wanna check out my new poem ?

meager fox
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It was inspired by the video pasted
And another individual

meager fox
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@bold idol

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The twist I read at the last stanza is subtle and brutal. The first two breathe life and then, "if I could bring you back.." ouch.

Then,
first stanza: "a book I own" second stanza: just "a book"
third: "if I could bring you back".

Here, there, gone. It hit me, too.

meager fox
meager fox
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"Dried ink" — Book.

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@outer sail one of my best. I will be happy if you rate that and can give me tips

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i tried to to do the staves

outer sail
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Aaaaah okok

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gimme a sec!

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This is actually so sweet!

But I think for ever. could be forever ( I also understand if that's how you read it like FOR EVER )

The rest of the poem is just mwah

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I don't give ratings unfortunately.

meager fox
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Thanks