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This is truly beautiful... And sad 😦
The message and theme of the poem are very clear. You used a sad story to convey a positive message to the reader, which is beautiful. I hope you're feeling better now, also! 🙂
I especially liked the last stanza. Fantastic job, and keep it up!! 😄
glass nimbus
This is truly beautiful... And sad 😦
The message and theme of the poem are ver...
Thank you! Really means a lot 🙂
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@gilded kite
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How come
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I’m glad you felt something, that is my aim, I’m glad you liked it
Which bit moved you
gilded kite
The “do not be hesitant” part, the “fall for her and her flaws” part, and the entirety of the last page
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The “do not be hesitant” part, the “fall for her and her flaws” part, and the en...
Wonderful! @gilded kite has just pregressed to level 2!
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Also, “a chapter in never thought would end” and “time will tell as it always does”
Basically all of it, but those specifically stood out
glass nimbus
This is the only other poem that I have written that fits the theme of loss, if you’d like to read it. https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1257741528936349887 I think it’s the best thing I’ve written