A Delivery of Our Emotions

[jagged terrace]

A Prose Poem about reflections from the difficult days.

[unreal sand]

Words yummy

[jagged terrace]

@feral estuary

@granite topaz

@hardy kite

@molten shuttle

@naive prism

@jagged terrace

@stone robin

@unreal island

@jagged terrace

@thick vigil

[hardy kite]

Nice nice.

[jagged terrace]

Thanks!

[granite topaz]

the way you capture the depth of shared pain and support in this poem is truly moving. i mean i can feel the unwavering commitment in your words, especially when you promise to share their worries. the metaphor of a haunting house as a shared space of suffering is hauntingly beautiful.

your poem is a raw and intimate portrayal of enduring pain together, and the sacrifice and support that come with it. the line, "we were the sacrifices then and we are the sacrifices now," is a powerful conclusion, emphasizing the ongoing nature of your bond and struggle. absolutely stunning work!!

[unreal island]

This is really nice! Although it could be more 'divided' because visually, this way, it almost reads like a paragraph. Either way, great job! 😄

[jagged terrace]

Thank youuu! Yeah it makes sense, thanks for pointing that out, lemme edit it a bit :))

[bitter sparrow]

Ma puff puffed puffingly

[jagged terrace]

I'm glad my words were able to reach you this vividly! Thank you!!
Yeah, I guess emotions flow well on a whim. I appreciate you :))

[jagged terrace]

Haha thanks pretty perfect person!

[bitter sparrow]

There are only three kinds
The honoured ones @cinder dagger
The Puffed ones @jagged terrace
And....
The Perfect one.

[jagged terrace]

Lol indeed

[stone robin]

Ok lovely poem same thing applies here, switch up the format

[jagged terrace]

I'd like to understand what would that imply as. This is a Prose Poem and all that I've encountered is that it appears as a plain paragraph and does not apply specific verse structural or meters. So I'd appreciate if you explain what formatting here means.

[stone robin]

like cutting the lines of the poem, making couplets ect.., making them fit on the page, instead of having it spread across the page

[jagged terrace]

I see, Prose Poetry doesn't deliver that though.

[stone robin]

Yeah it doest mb 😂 , i need to study the forms of poetry more thoroughly