#Melancholia and the Victim
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Quite an interesting concept. It made for a fun read!
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :))
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This is too relatable 😅
Fantastic job, Puff ❤️
Thanks a bunch, Skugi! ❤️
Yeah it probably hit the wound^^'
DAMN ok the way you describe the struggle of loving something that drains you, its so vivid, and hauntingly beautiful like i can feel the desperation and the hope intertwined in every line. the metaphor of being a ghost, hollowed out by an unrelenting presence, is extremely powerful. your plea at the end, to know yourself and find peace-
nah i dont have the right word to describe it 😭
this poem overall is raw and personal, and it captures the pain and longing perfectly great job puff!!!
Thanks a bunch again Zeno! I appreciate your detailed feedback!! Aww, you're too sweet <33 thanks 