A conversational expression of a random breakdown night.
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umbral mist
@night pollen
@austere cradle
@umbral mist
@true crane
@prime lily
@hearty parcel
@rapid quarry
@stark depot
Ik this is not even poetical, I just... wanted to share.
austere root
I love the duality and convo style
austere cradle
puff you did not-
THAT HURT
it hurt way too much god-
the inner dialogues capture a relentless battle with self-doubt and existential despair. the way you’ve portrayed the questions and answers, it feels like a mirror reflecting those moments when self-criticism is at its peak, when those voices are at their peak. the stark honesty about feeling inadequate, and the dark irony of finding peace in death, is hauntingly relatable. your words beautifully convey the pain of feeling like you're never enough, and the longing for a release from that torment. it's raw, brutally honest, and deeply personal.
this one's my favorite of all the poems youve ever written
prime lily
ok I absolutely LOVE the new format!! It adds tension and suspense right away. I also love the message and theme of the poem. It really does explore the conflict between yourself and who everone else wants you to be. LOVE THIS
covert onyx
CONVERSATIONAL.
IT IS LOVELY ADD A FEW RHYME LIKE THERE ARE IN HELLFIRE SONG I NOTREDAME, IT WILL ADD AN COMPLEXITY AND BEAUTY TO IT
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rapid quarry
umbral mist
I love the duality and convo style
Thank you!
umbral mist
puff you did not-
T-T Oops I did, thank you so much for your words really. I appreciate it that you enjoyed my work! Your interpretations are so enlightening at times when even I'm not sure what made me write all that. Thanks, sweet Zeno :))
umbral mist
ok I absolutely LOVE the new format!! It adds tension *and* suspense right away....
Thank youuuu, awesome dear! :')) I'm glad this even made sense lol
umbral mist
my caps locks
Haha thanks for commenting, I'll keep those in mind!
true crane
This is honestly extremely unique... It's very fascinating. Great job, Puff! 😄
A lot of your poems have dark undertones, on some personal level. If you ever need to vent about anything, my DMs are always open 🙂
umbral mist
This is honestly extremely unique... It's very fascinating. Great job, Puff! 😄
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Thank you so much, Skugi! I appreciate it. 
Thanks for saying that too, you are always welcome to express as well :))
austere cradle
T-T Oops I did, thank you so much for your words really. I appreciate it that yo...
😭 aww no but fr that one was so good like man-
analog parcelBOT
😭 aww no but fr that one was so good like man-
Wonderful! @austere cradle has just pregressed to level 8!
hardy grove
Woah this one's very unique, the emotional depth is crazy and it's very good!💜
fickle tree
This reminds me of a poem
umbral mist
Woah this one's very unique, the emotional depth is crazy and it's very good!💜<...
Aww Thankss Violet! ❤️
umbral mist
This reminds me of a poem
Hmm?
umbral mist
I haven’t posted it yet 😉
That was your reaction? Interesting
fickle tree
That was your reaction? Interesting
No lol, but your last stanza kinda made me question why i wrote mine 😅
umbral mist
No lol, but your last stanza kinda made me question why i wrote mine 😅
Making someone question themselves? My work is rocking.
umbral mist
Whatever 🙂