"Dried Ink" — Is it this was waste of ink

[vale edge]

Some good imagery in the last few lines, if you just clarify the grammar and wording it could be quite deep. But the general idea is quite emotionally rich

Well done👏

[proud onyx]

Sorry this only translated version of my poem. i write in polish but thanks for comment. take care mate

[vale edge]

Ohhh, that makes sense. Thats alright then. If I could understand Polish I’d try give better feedback😅

[proud onyx]

Thats why i translated this

or i try to

[rocky ivy]

The answer to your question is NO this is just representation on a screen if anything it's a waste of electricity. There's no ink in this message at all. The other question is this a waste of words because what we have is over. Probably yes but use it cathartically and it isn't

[proud onyx]

is translated from peace of paper

so you know

[rocky ivy]

still this is what I see

and it's electricity

take a picture of your impassioned letter and it holds together

[dull marsh]

*take a picture of

your impassioned letter and

it holds together*

- swdshfrmby

[proud onyx]

Okay

i will but it is in polish

so still

you woud need a transaltion

[rocky ivy]

If it's in Polish you must translate then polish

[proud onyx]

"Diary after you" — Is it this was waste of ink