#The Dream World—Persian Poem Translation

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@floral marsh

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Wow very beautiful nice translation and narration

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The narration was really good, and I like the poetry

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9.7/10 for me

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Appreciate it a lot!

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While you’re here I wrote another poem, but this one isn’t a translation. It’s my own.

floral marsh
dense plume
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I’ll share it

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One sec

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@simple hinge

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I saw you like giving poetry feedback

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@violet vortex

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@haughty terrace

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@foggy lodge you also give good feedback. Would appreciate your input 😊

violet vortex
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Great narration!

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Is this written by you or another poet?

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One suggestion would be to not use your phone whilst you narrate

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It would connect with the audience much better

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tawny gyroBOT
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That’s what that account is for, I’ve dedicated it to translating my grandmothers poetry.

dense plume
# violet vortex It would connect with the audience much better

But here’s a poem that is an original by me:

shoira_noriniso

Poem The Light
Written by Anushervon, grandson of Noriniso Alimuhammad and manager of this account.

#tajikistan #tajikpoetry #persian #persianpoetry #poetry #poetrycommunity #translatedpoetry #poetrylovers #точикистон #iran #afghanistan #farsi #таджикистан #literature #адабиёт

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violet vortex
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You grandma would be so proud of you

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What language is the original?

dense plume
violet vortex
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Ohh where you from?

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violet vortex
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Never heard of that country before

violet vortex
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The light of perfection

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Honestly really emotional too

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Thank you very much

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I’ll work on memorizing all future poems so I’m not looking at my phone or reading from a book

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violet vortex
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So you can look at it but the audience would think you’ve memorised it

dense plume
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Is there a good word for “the value of the present moment” you could recommend?

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There’s a word in my language called ghanimat, which means exactly that

ancient patioBOT
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*There’s a word in my

language called ghanimat, which

means exactly that*

- azfire
dense plume
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I need it in English

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For instance, today is ghanimat, us talking is ghanimat. Yesterday and tomorrow will be ghanimat

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haughty terrace
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@dense plume can you post the poem in text or picture? Posting links to personal profiles count as self-promotion in the server, and is not allowed..

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I’m asking for feedback and support.
Everyone is technically doing self promotion. They’re posting their own poetry with their name and pinging.

haughty terrace
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That is internally.

haughty terrace
dense plume
haughty terrace
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Let me check the rules for another time

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haughty terrace
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just do as I say.

dense plume
# haughty terrace just do as I say.

Brother, I haven’t done anything wrong. Don’t go on a power trip either.

I’m just sharing poetry, completely within the rules of the server.

You’re creating more unofficial rules.

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I don’t want to argue about it. If it was truly important it would be listed.

haughty terrace
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The rules are not hard and fast. So as a moderator I am asking you to post via a different method since external links to personal profiles fall under self-promotion, which is not allowed in the server.

dense plume
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I’m really disappointed in this server.

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@haughty terrace there’s a reason for the video, people get to here the intonation of the poem. Plus, they also hear the poem in its original language.