From Your Pastry

[patent hinge]

An expression, a letter to a close one

[lethal gazelle]

Yummy words

[vital tinsel]

Hey

Puff

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[patent hinge]

Gotcha

Thanks!

@austere lichen

@covert wagon

@west crystal

@opal oak

@vague escarp

[vital tinsel]

Np

Btw, Nice poem

[patent hinge]

@patent hinge

@rose mountain

[patent hinge]

Thank youuu sweet potat!!

[patent hinge]

Aw thanks, Crazoo!

@tranquil vessel

@dark crag

@hallow bone

@foggy marsh

@patent hinge

@half cargo

[vague escarp]

This is beautiful!! I love the personification this poem is filled to the brim with! 😄

Great job!

[patent hinge]

Thank you, Skugi!! Glad you liked it

[tranquil vessel]

https://tenor.com/view/that-escalated-quickly-gif-13528303

That was a surprise.

[patent hinge]

Glad my words were able to captivate you

[patent hinge]

Wow I like it

[dark crag]

I don't know why I'm always once again shocked by how amazing you are with rhythm and flow. Every time I read another piece, it feels like I'm reading your work again for the first time.

[patent hinge]

Thanks! :))

[patent hinge]

Aww thank youu sm!

[austere lichen]

omg i love this
it’s super abstract yet it’s vivid in its own right and super uniquely expressive
it kind of has that feel that’s meant to be comprehensible to the outside viewer but to those it’s written by / to, it speaks on a very personal and detailed level— something you don’t see too often
as always, really well done

[patent hinge]

Thanks a bunch, Ikari! I'm glad you enjoyed this one

[daring sapphire]

Wonderful! @patent hinge has just pregressed to level 17!

[patent hinge]

Thanks for acknowledging

[hallow bone]

And when for this pastry, the sweetness arrives
It will still wait for the source it loves the most, your eyes i like the little rhyme going on here

nice

[covert wagon]

this poem feels like a tender letter to a lost love, filled with personal touches that make it deeply moving. the way you describe the little details—like the red beans and the vanilla—brings a sense of intimacy and warmth.

the line “waiting for a note, a note without apology” is heart-wrenching, capturing that hope for a simple, sincere connection. even though you met online, the emotions are real and profound, making your longing and the sweetness you describe so relatable. this poem is a beautiful, personal reflection of love and distance, and it resonates deeply. absolutely adored it!

[foggy marsh]

sweet poem (and even a sweeter letter)

sugar spike though gonna be off-charts 📈

[patent hinge]

Thank you!

[patent hinge]

Aw thanks a bunch!!! glad you liked it :))

[patent hinge]

Thanks for diagnosing my work as diabetic B)

[foggy marsh]

need insulin ?

[patent hinge]

Free? Yeah, sure

[foggy marsh]

nothing is free in this cruel world

[patent hinge]

What are you charging then

[foggy marsh]

a pineapple pastry then

[patent hinge]

Quite an ironic exchange

[foggy marsh]

isn't it?

[patent hinge]

It very is, Sir

[foggy marsh]

knighthood this early ?

honoured

[patent hinge]

More like a girl I know called Sarcastic Courtesy, her wits are beyond many

[foggy marsh]

sounds british, love.

send her my regards, tea and a bottle of courtesy nonetheless too.

[patent hinge]

Well you sounded ancient here, dear

[foggy marsh]

well my ancestors were kinda cave painters

[patent hinge]

I'll try, she's not a fan exactly of offerings

[foggy marsh]

tell her it's made with grapes and some bitterness

she might fancy it

[patent hinge]

Ah, no wonder the tradition ceased at some point

[foggy marsh]

the ink and stones ran out

[daring sapphire]

Wonderful! @foggy marsh has just pregressed to level 5!

[patent hinge]

That's basically wine lol

[foggy marsh]

i know

not a science student , ehh?

[patent hinge]

Humanities enough to know how you must've flunked history

[foggy marsh]

wait , people can read this conversation right?

[patent hinge]

Yeah

[foggy marsh]

humble enough to tell you I was good at it

[patent hinge]

Wanna take it to dm? I don't wish the server to go through more salty takes eh

[foggy marsh]

sure

[west crystal]

this is a very nice read and it felt very cute, but to be completely honest i have no idea what this is trying to convey. i usually never have trouble with your poems but this one has me rereading several times to fully grasp it, despite it not coming off as too deep?