The Giant

[shell canyon]

describing dust as a “Sheet of silk — glowing hammock / from sun to earth” is so comforting and visually expressive, love it! and “wild, rain-sodden stalks” too. there’s real primordial, nostalgic and poignant energy in this piece. great work ^^ I’d love to read more from you!

[weak sail]

I really appreciate that, and I’m also glad you understood it.

I’d like to read more from you too

[foggy widget]

I haven’t had chance to fully digest this poem yet but I love the imagery it’s very well written!

[weak sail]

Thank you I intentionally left it a little vague for that reason so I’m happy you enjoyed it.

[shell canyon]

literally same i read it and chewed on it for a bit and i still haven’t mastered it