To My People

[inland shoal]

A letter to the civilians, the rage over nation issues and an attempt to show the clearer vision.

@midnight crow

@fickle kraken

@strong adder

@burnt rampart

@teal axle

@warm belfry

@inland shoal

@inland shoal
@sly rose

@inland shoal

[fickle kraken]

This is a really fascinating poem

Also, I find the difference in our styles very intriguing

You don't seem to divide poems into stanzas very much, because every line flows into the next one beautifully, until the poem ends

It's like one note of a song, and it's wonderful

My poems tend to have a "structure" of some sort of narrative

Or a story that you are meant to visualise, almost "scene by scene"

[dawn zinc]

*Or a story that

you are meant to visualise,

almost "scene by scene"*

- skugi.

[fickle kraken]

So every single one of my poems is divided into stanzas

The fact yours aren't is so fascinating

Truly intriguing and distinct style, I really enjoy it :))

Amazing job!!

[inland shoal]

I understand that and I admire it so much as well.

[inland shoal]

I often like to flow it altogether and when I wish to make a particular intended distinction just how you described 'scene by scene', I do the same like you must've seen in #1239643979901964328 tho it's not as often

[inland shoal]

I love this difference as well! Thank youu I'm glad you enjoyed this one

@proven quail

[proven quail]

Goshhh, the imagery in this. And it's quite a relevant piece of work

The last line is beautifully put

It drives a point across without shoving it down anyone. The best way

[strong adder]

this poem hits hard, capturing the turmoil and the frustration of being unheard in a world bent on chaos. the imagery of "larcenous lotuses" and "our panther lurking behind" is vivid and powerful, symbolizing the hidden threats and corrupted beauty. the questions you pose, especially "who are you in this nation, my people?" and "how come your noise didn't shatter the luxury bought from your blood?" really strike a chord, highlighting the disconnect between the suffering of the many and the opulence of the few. its raw, its angry, and its incredibly real. loved it :))

[inland shoal]

Thanks a bunch, you get it so well as always <33

[inland shoal]

Yeah that was what I intended to do and believe, good to know you liked this one! Thanks :))

[inland shoal]

@inland shoal
Wow, this poem is a powerful and emotional outcry against the injustices of the world. The language is rich and evocative, with vivid imagery that conjures up a sense of despair and frustration. This poem is a masterpiece. The language is powerful and evocative, the imagery is vivid and rich, and the emotions are raw and honest. The poem is a call to action, a challenge to the status quo, and a powerful expression of the struggles and injustices of the world.

[strong adder]

:))