Oneirology

[craggy dragon]

*First poem in a

while that made me feel that

I was improving!*

- aden.28

[lime haven]

I really love the concept and the entire wirting style,...a small qiestion does the space between the lines signifies a pause or was it just a visual format ?

[tardy pine]

there is so much magic here “dried grass pried into his teeth” is so visceral and unique, as the boy is falling up. “A flower’s mouth caught in his skin” i will probably never decipher but it’s haunting and psychedelic, very very cool. this reads like professional grade poetry, you could definitely publish!

[obsidian prawn]

haha thank you so much!

[obsidian prawn]

it's just couplets

like a poetry form

[lime haven]

Got it thanks !

[floral pivot]

Reading this is like daydreaming

That’s such a masterclass of a poem

Very jealous