#Who am i

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rain coral
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I've changed so much since I woke up
That I no longer know who I am!

Am I a brave prince charming at dawn?
While at sunset's light, I'm not so charming,
And under the night's shadow, I become a dreadful villain.

In a radiant dawn, I believe the day will be good!
But as the sun sets, illuminated by twilight's lights,
I realize I'm mistaken.
The day isn't so good, I'm not so brave.
A battle is waged between me and my mind,
And when night falls with its dark and chilling veil,
My woes and demons spring into action,
Covering every ray of my thoughts and hopes.
A true chaos, an endless fight,
I become my own worst enemy,
Only wanting the torment to end,
For the day to dawn and for me to become again
A handsome prince.

A new day, an old question:
Who am I?

Am I the sweet and fragile damsel in distress,
In search of her brave warrior riding his beautiful white steed,
Dreaming of a "happily ever after"?
Or am I the wicked witch poisoning the beautiful princess?

Oh, beautiful damsel!
Foolish and naive waiting for the noble knight.
He doesn't come on a white horse,
Instead,
He comes riding on a tangle of sweet words like a piece of cake,
A cake poisoned with lies and illusions,
Revealing himself as the true villain of the story.
And I realize that forever isn't always happy.

A new day, an old question:
Who am I?

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Am I a poet, dreamer, and lover
Capable of conveying emotions with my words,
Soothing the hearts of those who suffer
Warming the hearts of those who love?

Oh, sweet poet!
How can you reach a heart without knowing who you are?
Will they be just empty words, tossed into the wind,
Without direction, without emotion, just letters on a piece of paper.

A new day and...
And so, between day and night, I see myself,
A mix of light and shadow, in constant shiver.
Like the seasons, in eternal transition,
My essence redefines itself, in pure emotion.

Hero and villain, in one being,
Damsel and witch, ready to live.
Each side of me, part of a journey,
In search of an identity, never found.

So, with each new dawn,
I renew the quest to know myself.
At the end of the day, in the calm,
I am just me, in full harmony.
But after all, who am I
In this confusing poetry?

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@loud cave
@timber grove
@naive oxide
@manic ocean

timber grove
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WOAH

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HOL UP

rain coral
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@shadow ginkgo
@sleek vigil
@thorn sage
@hearty moss

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@vital turret

vital turret
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DAMN

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this is really really good!!!!!

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I love the questions you have put up in this poem!!!

rain coral
manic ocean
# rain coral I've changed so much since I woke up That I no longer know who I am! Am I a bra...

Amazing poem, and the questions, oh my god
It's so relatable.
"Am I the sweet and fragile damsel in distress, in search of her brave warrior riding his beautiful white steed,
Dreaming of a "happily ever after"? 🤌I loved these lines .
The questions and then the realisation is so well written.
At the end of the day, in the calm, I am just me, in full harmony.
It is a really beautiful phrase.
Thank you for sharing PRINCEEE 🩷

sleek vigil
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I loved it!!!! 😭 NO WORDS TO SAY!!! Well tuned phrases, I had a very good time reading!!! Thanks a lot!

rain coral
rain coral
twin vale
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This poem delves deep into the theme of self-discovery and the complexities of identity. It explores the idea of transformation and the constant struggle to understand oneself amidst changing circumstances and perceptions.

The repetition of the question "Who am I?" emphasizes the ongoing quest for self-awareness and the uncertainty that accompanies it. The comparison between the "sweet and fragile damsel" and the "wicked witch" further complicates the notion of identity, suggesting that one can embody both light and darkness.

The poem's conclusion offers a sense of disillusionment and resignation, as the speaker comes to terms with the complexities of life and the realization that "forever isn't always happy." Overall, the poem effectively captures the existential struggle of grappling with one's identity in a world of constant change and uncertainty.
Keep doing what ur doing!

loud cave
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@thorn sage

loud cave
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a really pretty job!

rain coral
shadow ginkgo
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Oh, beautiful damsel!
Foolish and naive waiting for the noble knight.
He doesn't come on a white horse,
Instead,
He comes riding on a tangle of sweet words like a piece of cake,
A cake poisoned with lies and illusions,
Revealing himself as the true villain of the story.
And I realize that forever isn't always happy This poem gives those disney movie vibes which I like