#4 legged companion

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fiery mantle
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Their furs yellow like the sun,
Or perhaps white as the snow,
Maybe even brown as wood,

Their hearts made of gold,
Eyes twinkling like the stars,
Souls of angels,

Fluffy like a cloud,
Soft like a pillow,
Warm like a fire,

Always accompanied by them,
Never again alone,
Following in your shadow,
Protecting your every move,

The golden stars,
Given to us by the heavens,
For they are angels to us.

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For that golden retriever I grew up with that stole my heart 🤍

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@mental idol
@naive sluice
@radiant pike
@sharp abyss
@dense bane

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@hybrid hamlet

naive sluice
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ma Elien stop killing me with these poems of yours, I seriously can't withstand the wholesomeness of these

magic flume
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Goodness, I adore this poem. I love how you strung your words together and the meaning is beautiful. Your poem is ineffably amazing, and I applaud you for that

odd violet
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CAT CAT CAT CAT CAT

willow wharf
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I'm waiting for the caffeine to kick in a bit to read it again

jolly martenBOT
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*I'm waiting for the

caffeine to kick in a bit

to read it again*

- swdshfrmby
willow wharf
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I've been Haikued when I intended nothing of the kind I'm being surveilled by an AI mind, but I'm too wild to want my words scrunched to conform to some mathematical order

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The bot popped a yellow heart immediately on my resistance line.

fiery mantle
fiery mantle
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I rarely rhyme with my poems

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It’s not my strong point sadly🥲

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Honestly don’t know mate but in my opinion yes haha:)

willow wharf
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Pick a simile, sprinkle in cliches, let the lines trickle halfway down the space then find an exalted way to say "I like dog"

wide shoreBOT
fiery mantle
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I do believe btw there are different forms of poems like style wise just in any other art forms like painting and photography!

willow wharf
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poetry needs a way to make the meaning and the sound of words feel cool

fiery mantle
willow wharf
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poets take a view of something and present it unexpectedly

jolly martenBOT
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*poets take a view

of something and present it

unexpectedly*

- swdshfrmby
willow wharf
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a few lines need to have a surprise to keep the eyes going

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the effect of reading must be a change in the reader

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the corners of the mouth might give a slight twitch towards smile

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or something deep is stirred as a connection of thought or feeling within like a tap, slap, or hug that takes your breath

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reminding you perhaps that life will end in death

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that you may forget when you look into the bliss of an infant's eyes

jolly martenBOT
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*that you may forget

when you look into the bliss

of an infant's eyes*

- swdshfrmby
willow wharf
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all writing potentially is permanent, so poetry is an attempt to time travel to the future and meet the eyes of someone human EXCEPT not any more these words light up a digital space not a page written out and found among the personal affects these words are stored among some server until the power goes off and all will be extinquished together, so you'd better read them NOW I spill them out and kiss them goodbye

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I have to get in the shower and go work

fiery mantle
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@twilit swift

twilit swift
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Oh yeah, I actually read this a few hours ago

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I have nothing to say, other than "nice"

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I'm quite confused by the random quatrain near the end though

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I'd say 7.75/10

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Let's round it up to 8/10

fiery mantle
fiery mantle
mental idol
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You truly are an animal lover, it's beautiful 🙂

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Amazing job!