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#Cinematic Escape -Rider
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lament burrow
I know its not good but ive been having trouble channeling emotions into my poetry the way i could before, as a result of my own numbness, i want to know how i could make it less bland
@tall fossil
tall fossil
ok this is a good poem as well, it sounds like a song, the rhythm is good
the word choice is okish here,
tall fossil
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maybe experiment with more um, figurative language
like a bird without a song- now I know u can do better than this, this is not the poet i once know