Us in a World

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An expression about the meanings of existence in this inhumane world.

@dawn reef

@sly panther

@lyric aspen

@dire granite

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[dire granite]

I am so jelly of how you can just sense the natural flow of words and weave them togther into THIS

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@light pecan

@velvet flare

@echo onyx

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Hehe thanks sm~ :))

@proven cloak

@vernal bluff

[light pecan]

Gone are the days that my competition consist of one man...

Now I'm up against two very bright poets. My pen can't compare.

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DONT COMPARE URSELF POETICA

ur work is just as artistic as the rest

[light pecan]

My eyes were woozy until I read a BOMBSHELL OF A NOTIFICATION FROM YOU.

Thanks for kicking back some energy.

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pleasure is all mine 🥰🥰🥰🥰

ill read this poem in a bit

[short latch]

Aww thanks that's really sweet, though authentic expressions shouldn't be compared :))

[dawn reef]

DAMN?
my GOD this one goes hard
the meaning it builds on continuously, and the personification of the different aspects really bring this poem to life
it has a way to provoke strong emotions in the reader whilst also encouraging them to think about just how deep this really goes
it reminds me a bit of my own pieces in its flow and progression, though not so much topic. i love how you chose to tackle this one and make use of every individual line and then some
truly well done

[green jewel]

Wonderful! @dawn reef has just pregressed to level 16!

[lyric aspen]

“So we circle around the luminous facade”

beautifully written, as always. love the flow of this one. great job!!

[short latch]

"i, a melting ice, take step on the burning paths" dude

"you, a summer rain, confusing people like childish metaphors in a game"

love the description

"misery, a lost lover. people, a lost cause." DAMN PUFF. honestly love the personification of the words used here, makes it feel more intimate. a new perspective opened.

TRACING WORDS ON THE ABANDONED THROATS

i can quote everything atp

[sly panther]

this poem really struck me. it captures the essence of activism, lost causes, and the relentless struggle for change. the imagery of saints leaving an empty space and activists losing their placards but not their voices is powerful. it feels like a lament for a world that’s forgotten the importance of standing up and speaking out. the poem’s reflection on misery and the lost cause of people feels almost like a battle cry for those who still have the strength to trace words on abandoned throats, to speak up for what once was. its a somber reminder of the dreams we might never see realized but continue to fight for.

great job!

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Thanks so much Ikari, even tho I'm in my dizzy head town times rn your words reach me gently.

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Thank youuuu redbull's lover

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Ahh thank you Irene! I'm glad you find my work that astonishing to quote it, a pleasure to receive :))

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Dear Zeno, sometimes I really wish to give you a hug when you express your views on my writings. It feels personal the way you understand it. Thank you so much for being there

[sly panther]

awww im glad i could be<333 🫂

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@swift radish

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@ocean palm

[ocean palm]

The last line is absolutely perfect

"So we circle around the luminous facade" may be my favorite

A wonderful play with words

This is phenomenal, as are all the poems I've seen from you 😄

Keep it up, Puff!!